Story The Train

notyoung

Contributing Member
Unfinished for over a year - but you might enjoy the chapters I did finish.

Chapter 1

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Wednesday. 13 July, 17:30

RUMBLE!

The predicted thunderstorms seem to be arriving on time or at least their noises are. It's sunny here at the moment and the weather radar shows a small rain cell maybe a mile North of us. The forecast includes "Strong gusty winds" so anything outside that is easily moved by the wind has either been tied down or moved inside an outbuild…

BOOM!

RUMBLE!! SCREECH!! THUD!! RUMBLE!! THUD!!


I felt the house shake during some of that and I heard dishes rattling in the kitchen cabinets. I've never heard a "SCREECH!!" in a thunderstorm except when a tornado takes a metal roof off a building. There were no tornadoes in the forecast and we've not had a Tornado Watch or Warning so where'd that noise come from? All that noise has to be something big and heavy moving oddly and impacting the ground. Maybe a train derailment at the crossing about two miles East of us? Turn on the public service scanner and see if…

'…smoke and fire. Maybe a tank car on the train fro …'

BOOM!

I think that sound verifies the "tank car" part of…

Flicker! Flicker! Beep!Beep!Beep! Beep!Beep! Beep!Beep!Beep! Beep!Beep!

The UPS serenade is telling me that power's out without the off, on, off, on, off to stay of a power co-op circuit breaker trying to reset. The power feed here comes via aerial lines that run within a couple hundred feet or so of that crossing so I can reasonably expect the explosion took down lines and maybe some poles. I think that means we're on our own for power until the HazMat folks have checked and cleaned that area and the NTSB has completed the on-site part of their investigation - things that might be measured in days? On the brighter side, we are more than two miles from that crossing, it's uphill all the way to us and the prevailing winds are Southwest to Northeast so we shouldn't be in the path of any noxious fumes from whatever chemicals made up that train - the typical train has about fifty tank cars of something industrial and often unpleasant or dangerous plus whatever is in the dozen or so boxcars. The million dollar houses a mile east of the crossing are probably not a good place to be today.

That aerial power feed supplies us and a few hundred other houses, one or two grocery stores, one gas station, a bank and maybe the post office and a library branch out here. And it supplies the U-verse carrier terminal so I should check whether… No internet, no TV, no landline phone so U-verse is down. I did read something about AT&T shutting that service down in a year or two so not surprising that they've done no backup power upgrades. They're planning on doing away with Operator Services and Directory Assistance in January of 2023 (unless the FCC steps in and says otherwise) - those incompetent SBC corporate folks would do anything to save a buck and try to rescue themselves from their own stupidity.

Pull up the listing of HazMat card numbers and associated chemicals on my laptop to have it available when the local TV stations get on the scene or they get a drone up…

'…Pumper 13, nearest hydrant is on the East side of the road, about a half mile up. Pumper 7, go the long way around and put foam on the fire from the other side of the crossing. One visible damaged tank car has "3421" which is potassium hydrogen difluoride solution and it's corrosive but it doesn't react with water. Check the other numbers before starting to hose things down.'

That's interesting, but how corrosive is it and what other things made up that train?

'This is Pumper 7; we're evacuating the daycare on this side of the fire. What's a safe distance from the…'

BOOM!

"Safe" is probably a lot farther away than that daycare: it's less than a quarter mile East of the crossing. Wonder what the death toll will be from this? How many firefighters and how many kids and adults at that daycare? This is rapidly becoming a small SHTF event with people dying and nothing that can be done to prevent it…

Bee-doo! Bee-doo! Bee-doo! Bee-doo! Bee-doo!

That's the SAME weather radio.

'This is a Civil Emergency Message for Cherokee, Dade and Mason Counties. A train derailment has occurred on Cooper Road near County 139 in Mason County. Current winds are from the southwest so anyone living east of that location should evacuate to the South to get away from the potentially hazardous chemicals released from damaged tank cars. Anyone living north of that location should evacuate to the West. The chemicals in the tank cars range from corrosive to flammable to fatal if inhaled so this evacuation is immediate and total. The community centers and public schools in Munford and Pikeville are being opened to serve as shelters for those displaced by the evacuation order. This is life or death so you must evacuate now!'

We're sufficiently West of and high enough above the wreck to be OK, other than without power, so I should get some backup power going. There's nothing I can do right now to help with the train wreck situation - other than staying out of the way. It's several hours until dark but late enough in the day that there's not much solar power available, so first choice backup power at this hour is the 1600 watt inverter generator. It can power the fridge, the freezer, a small window air conditioner and some LED lighting until dark and it can top off the solar backup system's batteries if today's "Partly cloudy" forecast didn't provide enough sun to do that. Down to the basement to check the status of the backup system, get the 12/3 extension cord and the key to the equipment shed.

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The gen's in place with a full gas tank and it started on the second pull. The 12/3 cord is plugged into the gen and I'll take the other end to the transfer switch.

That's done, so flip the switches from "Line" to "Gen" by load size: freezer, then window A/C, then fridge, then the battery charger for the solar system's batteries. The Kill-A-Watt meter shows the gen's putting out about 1400 watts and that should drop as the batteries reach full charge. It's a positive that today's "Partly cloudy" has kept the day's high temperature to 82F instead of the 94F of the previous sunny week - that means there's a little less work for the window A/C to do when it's just keeping one bedroom cool enough for sleeping.

Bzzt!Bzzt!

The power co-op's app, maybe? It is. Our power went out at 17:32 and the Estimated Restoration Time is "Assessing Damage". I should grab the rechargeable 7 inch HDTV and take it up with me to see if any local TV station has a camera on the ground or a helicopter or a drone watching the scene.

The local ABC affiliate has a chopper on the scene and the train is at least fifty cars long, mostly tank cars, but they're not zoomed in enough for me to be able to read the HazMat numbers on that 7 inch screen. Turn on the pure sine wave UPS for the A/V cabinet and then switch the 50 inch TV to "Antenna" and let it scan for stations. I'll have about 45 minutes of power for that TV.

The TV finds the ABC affiliate and now I can read some of those numbers; unfortunately, some of the tankers are around the curve on the North side of the crossing so their HazMat cards aren't readable. I should make a list of the ones I can read and then look up those numbers.

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1073 - liquid oxygen - 2 cars

1075 - propane - 3 cars

1294 - toluene - 3 cars

2480 - methyl isocyanate - 1 car

9666 - military waste - 6 cars


OK, list is done for the cards I could read but there are maybe twenty more tank cars around the curve and I can't read any of those cards. It's probably safe to assume that they're filled with similarly non-people-friendly substances. Toluene is used a "starting fluid" for internal combustion engines, including diesels, instead of the ether of previous decades, among its other uses as a solvent, and inhalation can cause neurological damage - remember people sniffing super glue? Its use as a "starting fluid" guarantees it's flammable, as the card on that tanker shows. Methyl isocyanate is a pesticide ingredient and a very nasty chemical - in 1984, a methyl isocyanate leak at a chemical plant in Bhopal, India killed almost 4000 people and injured over half a million. That will need some serious intervention/containment as the vapor is heavier than air and seeks out the lowest places. Liquid oxygen isn't dangerous in and of itself, other than being cold, but it's propinquity to the toluene could make for a huge IED if they both leak or the heat of the fire explodes either tank since the toluene is between the liquid oxygen and the methyl isocyanate. "Military waste" could be almost anything, from slightly radioactive water to chemical or biological warfare agents being sent for disposal - not a good thing at any train wreck. This is a potentially huge disaster and people won't see the methyl isocyanate comi…

Bee-doo! Bee-doo! Bee-doo! Bee-doo! Bee-doo!

'This is a Civil Emergency Message for Cherokee, Dade and Mason Counties. A train derailment has occurred on Cooper Road near County 139 in Mason County. Current winds are from the Southwest so anyone living East of that location should evacuate to the South to get away from the potentially hazardous chemicals released from damaged tank cars. Anyone living North of that location should evacuate to the West. The train's cargo includes methyl isocyanate which can kill if inhaled and causes skin damage on contact. You will NOT see the methyl isocyanate vapor before it causes damage to your body. EVACUATE IMMEDIATELY! If you do not have transportation, call 911 and mention how close you are to the derailment. This message is also going out by Amber Alert, Reverse-911 and all broadcast radio and TV stations.
'Repeating: YOU MUST EVACUATE IMMEDIATELY!'

That warning is probably a little late for most people within a half mile - maybe a mile or more - of the derailment. The two "BOOM!" that I heard earlier probably spread damage and burning fuel over a large area. Any leakage of liquids will run downhill to Harper's Creek and likely start killing off everything in those small wetlands before the HazMat folks can get any type of containment in place - those folks certainly can't work in an area with the potential for another "BOOM!" Guess we should write off using the park down there for several years - no more hikes to the remains of the old mill that was once powered by the creek…

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notyoung

Contributing Member
Chapter 2

Wednesday, 13 July, 18:50

The TV station's helicopter cameras have shown barricades manned by HazMat-suited and riot-shotgun-armed deputies out almost a mile to the East and North of the derailment but only a half mile to the South and a quarter mile or so to the West - us being uphill and upwind about two miles on the West side of this problem is a very good thing. The derailment site is surrounded by firefighters in HazMat gear with SCBA air tanks using hoses to try to put out the fires and cool the tank cars with damaging or potentially deadly contents, whether noxious or explosive. From the height of the flames, there's a lot of fuel burning in that area and the firefighters may be there overnight or longer. The size of the flames' base indicates there is a lot of space to be cleaned up when the flames are out and then they must figure out how to move the undamaged tank cars that are off the tracks. The ones with their wheels still near the tracks can be put back on the rails - if there's a long enough section of undamaged rails - using the typical railroad crane IF they can get a locomotive and that crane in from the other direction. There's only one set of tracks along there so they may have to clear the original locomotive and any cars on the South side of the crossing in order to repair those tracks before they can get the undamaged cars back on the rails. They might disconnect the first derailed car on the North side and bring a locomotive to the other end of those cars to pull them away from the fire and make space on the undamaged rails for the derailed cars as they are moved back into place. I think there will be TV coverage on the cable channels until this is cleared but the local OTA (over-the-air) channels will likely go back to commercial-supported programming during "prime time" - they do have to pay the bills. Without cable TV, I won't be seeing CNN or the Fox cable channels follow that minute-by-minute. I've used up 15 of the 45 minutes the good UPS can power the TV so time to turn off the big TV and just monitor status on the little TV - and connect that UPS to backup power to recharge its batteries in case I need the big screen again later.

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tap tap tap
knock knock knock
tap tap tap

tap tap tap tap
tap knock
tap knock tap tap

My ears tell me that's someone using taps on sidelite glass as dots and faint knocks on the door as dashes to spell out 'S O S H a l'. What do the cameras show me?
Hal is sneaking around to my basement door. He'd better have a good explanation.

"Benjamin."
"Franklin."
"I'll turn out the lights in here and you slip in quickly."
"Roger."

"Upstairs and you can explain yourself."
"I'll explain as we go up. Frank Davis was the engineer on that train and I'd bummed a ride with him on my way back to Asheville. He'd slowed for the curve before that crossing but there was nothing he could do when that gasoline tanker was coming up the little hill at full throttle with black smoke pouring from both stacks and it was headed for the crossing gate. I jumped off the engine and down into the ditch beside the tracks and I was down there when that tanker exploded. My ears are still ringing some but, other than a little singed hair, I just have scrapes and bruises. I didn't want to be there when the investigators came and maybe get Frank in trouble for having a non-employee on the train so I ran away from the tracks and up the hill on this side of the tracks. I was at the top and behind a tree when the next big 'BOOM!' happened - the flames from that were maybe a hundred feet North of the crossing. Could it have been that tank car of naphtha? Then I ran as hard as I could because I was afraid of another 'BOOM!' - that whole damned train is a HazMat nightmare."
"Nightmare as in?"
"Jack, it has toluene, LP, naphtha, methyl isocyanate, propane, a half dozen tank cars of some liquid that's corrosive and a bunch more of those labels for nasty or deadly contents."
"It's on the news. The second explosion probably killed a group of firefighters trying to evacuate a daycare East of the crossing and whatever kids and adults they were evacuating. Any cameras on the loco?"
"Yes, on front and rear. It has a Trip Data Recorder like ships have a Voyage Data Recorder but it includes the last five minutes of video from before the loco stopped and the first five minutes after it stopped. I don't know if a TDR can survive those big explosions."
"Are you in any of that video?"
"Maybe when I got out of the ditch and ran? Don't think I was visible to the cameras any other time."
"Maybe you'll be considered a drunk sleeping in the ditch that was awakened by an alarm clock no one could sleep through. Does anyone know you have a connection to me?"
"No, Jack. I owe you my life at least twice so I've never mentioned you anywhere."
"OK, I have stored food for a number of months so I won't be buying noticeably more groceries than usual - just don't complain about rice and beans."
"No complaints from me. How long can you keep me hidden?"
"Two weeks good enough? You'll be living in a windowless area but that ensures you won't have visible lights on when someone might be looking."
"Good enough."
"What do you know about that train?"
"Let me think on that and write out what I remember."

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Hal had three pages of hand-written notes - none of it good.

It's almost time for the 11PM news so let's see what they've pulled together about the derailment.

'Tonight's top story is the train derailment in Macon County. Figures from the scene indicate at least 400 injured and 220 killed or missing. The biggest tragedy is the deaths of 37 children, eight daycare workers and ten firefighters who were coordinating the evacuation of a daycare near the derailment. More from Tasha Price.'
'The firefighters were carrying the younger children and guiding the older ones to their trucks for a quick evacuation when the second explosion happened. The initial event has been traced to a gasoline tanker that ran through the crossing gate and hit the third car in the train, a tank car of liquid oxygen. The mixture of gasoline fumes and pure oxygen led to an extremely large blast which broke windows more than a mile away and spewed flames for almost a quarter of a mile and then a tank car exploded as the firefighters were attempting that evacuation…'

"That's enough of that. Hal, what else do you know about the train?"
"It was carrying something 'Top Secret' in some of the tank cars. No idea what it was or how many cars but Frank was definitely scared of something he was carrying. He just said the manifest had 'TS6' on the 'Contents' line for those cars."
"TS-whatever ratings are for life so let me see what I can find out with a few texts."

{Bill. What's in the 'TS6' tank cars involved in the derailment near me? Jack.}

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Bzzt! Bzzt!

A reply text from area code 202 is good. What does Bill have for me?

{One tank car each of soman and tabun. Two each of sarin and VX. All gasses dissolved in a liquid solvent that keeps them safely in the liquid as long as they are under pressure - think carbonated beverages and their pressure levels. Destination was the weapons destruction facility in Nevada. The numeric code is '9666' and the cards on the tank cars may have "Severe Inhalation Hazard" or something similar - that's not clear from the notes I found. Definitely bad stuff and needs very special handling. Military courier on his way as passenger in a fighter jet with documents signed by the Joint Chiefs giving you absolute power over those cars. The courier will also bring a lot of "how-to" on keeping those gasses in solution and the proper temperatures and conditions to keep the tank cars safe. If any of those tank cars are damaged, you have the authority to clear the site and call in full scale military HazMat from Edwards AFB. They'll be there in three hours or less after you call. Reserves from Dobbins ARB will be there with armed Humvees and basic military HazMat gear in less than an hour. Let me know when they arrive. Also when the courier arrives. Bill}

Shall we thoughtlessly ship enough nerve gas to kill off a few million people? Probably not a good idea to have all those tank cars as part of the same train. Need to know more about who planned that shipment, who configured the sequence of cars and about the driver of that gasoline tanker. When I have the proper documents in hand, I'll "dress up" and go speak to the powers that be. I'll text Bill to research who planned all those tank cars being on one train and who the truck driver was. That's a quick text and then maybe to bed for me?

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notyoung

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Chapter 3

Wednesday. 13 July, 23:45

Knock!  Knock!

"Yes?"
"Colonel Wilson, I'm Captain Joe Martin.  Where do you want the HazMat team?"
"Your vehicles are armed?"
"Yes."
"Then I'll guide you from the front seat."

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"Halt!  You can't cross that line!"
"Corporal, lock and load.  He's your first target."
"Sir."
"Deputy, I'm Colonel Wilson.  I've been assigned by the Joint Chiefs to handle the HazMat for the six tank cars with '9666' on the cards.  This is my crew and their security.  They are equipped with automatic weapons and everything is loaded with live ammo.  Either let us in or call the sheriff to this location."
"Sheriff Thompson is too busy for this nonsense!"
"Corporal, one burst to the left of the deputy.  Then to the right."
"Sir."

BRAPP!

"You almost shot me!  I'll…"

BRAPP!

"Next burst will be in you and not beside you Deputy!  Call the sheriff.  NOW!"

'Sheriff, I got armed military at the crossroads!  Some Colonel Wilson who…'

'But Sheriff…'

'Yes, Sheriff.'

"He'll be here in two minutes."

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"Hello, Jack.  Sorry about Deputy Wright; he does very little that matches his name but there's little I can do about him while his uncle is on the County Board of Commissioners.  What can I do for you?"
"Hello, Tom.  You have any info on the tank cars with '9666' on their cards?"
"Just that the manifest has 'TS6'."
"Think nasty things left over from the cold war.  One tank car each of soman and tabun.  Two each of sarin and VX…"
"Oh my God!  What do we do with that?"
"That's what we're here for.  This HazMat crew will inspect the cars and note any damage.  If there's no damage, they will tell you what's needed to keep those cars safe.  If there is any damage, they'll set up as much of a containment perimeter as is possible with the HazMat gear they have and I'll call in the big guns of HazMat from Edwards AFB.  They'll be here in three hours if needed."
"OK, three hours tells me they're on hot standby.  Those cars are yours and you can have any support you need.  I'll tell my deputies that you're in charge of those tank cars and anything near them - and that their lives depend on them doing what you tell them when you tell them."
"Thanks, Tom."
"Thank you, Jack, for getting someone on site who knows what it is they're trying to control.  What's the evacuation radius for those weapons?"
"In this quantity?  Maybe twenty miles or more for the contents of one tank car.  That at least doubles with each additional tank car that discharges its contents."
"Wonderful news.  Where do we evacuate a county's worth of people?"
"You can't.  Takes too long and there's nowhere to put that many people.  The TV news has already covered shootings over 'the last room' at two motels."
"Why didn't I hear about that?"
"Because they were in Munford and Pikeville and the local PD at each location handled them."
"Will that be happening at the next group of motels?"
"Possibly, although the next places along either route are much bigger than either Munford or Pikeville so there should be more motel rooms available - and none of those locations are in Macon County."
"Better someone else's headache than mine.  Your group brought lights?"
"Tom, they were towing two of the highway construction lighting trailers with 40 foot telescoping masts so they'll have near daylight illumination IF the area is clear of flammable fumes.  The guys in camo HazMat suits with SCBA air tanks have portable gas detectors and are making a survey of that possible problem before they set up the lights and start the generators."
"Good to have someone who knows what they're doing.  You want coffee, Jack?  I filled a thermos with Jamaican Blue Mountain Blend before I left the house."
"Sounds like a good idea.  You'll be here until the HazMat part is wrapped up?"
"I'll be here 'til sunup.  Chief Deputy Taylor will take the next eight hours unless there's something that needs me specifically."
"I'll be here until the HazMat is resolved locally or is in more capable hands.  I hope that thermos is full - this is good coffee and I expect to need a lot of it."

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notyoung

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Chapter 4

Thursday, 14 July, 00:50

"Colonel?"
"Yes, Captain?"
"Four of those '9666' tank cars are still on the rails. Of the two that are derailed, one just needs the front truck set back on the rails. The other one has damage to one coupler and the front truck. There's a new dent in that tank but it's rounded and the tank's internal temperature and pressure are currently within safe limits but both are rising. We need the FD to keep hosing all those tank cars to keep them as cool as possible until all the fires are out."

'Deputy Chief Davis from Colonel Wilson.'
'Yes, Colonel?'
'My HazMat team says the 9666 tank cars are OK as long they are hosed down to keep them cool until the fires are out. I think you recognize VX as something that should not be released.'
'Damn! Urgency understood. Pumper 4 is closest to those cars so I'll task them with that job until it's safe to stop. Prospects on getting a crane in to get things back on the tracks or onto a flatbed for removal?'
'Check with Sheriff Thompson as I don't yet have liaison to the railroad maintenance crews.'
'I'll check and have him arrange a contact for you. They need to know what you know before they start. Davis out.'
'Wilson out.'

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BANG!

Ching!

Big rifle, shooting at a tank car based on where the 'Ching!' appeared to come from. Need to get some protection for the tank cars and someone looking for the shooter.

'Captain Martin from Colonel Wilson.'
'Yes, Colonel?'
'Someone up the hill on the West side of the County 139 is shooting at the 9666 tank cars. The fill and drain valves are likely the most fragile parts of those tank cars so something that can stop or at least deflect .30 caliber or larger bullets would be good. The two tank cars that are off the tracks partially protect the two immediately behind them, so protection is needed for those two cars and the two at the North end of that group.'
'The armored Humvees provide at least that degree of protection so they can cover the drain valves. We need something bigger - or at least taller - to protect the fill mechanism on top of those cars.'
'Any Cougars in the area?'
'Not that I'm aware of but I can ask. Is there any sheet steel on the train's manifest? We could see about putting a sheet of 3/8" or 1/2" on top of a Humvee and leaning it against the tank car to provide that protection. With the steel at an angle, it can deflect a bigger bullet than it could stop head on.'
'Ask Sheriff Thompson. He either has a copy of the manifest or knows who has one.'
'Runner on the way to the sheriff. Humvees being moved as we speak. We can requisition one of the big wreckers to move and place the steel if it's on the list. Recon squad going the long way to get behind the shooter. You want him available for questioning?'
'Good work. If the shooter is in suicide mode - shooting at a tank of VX does pretty well define a suicide mission - we may not get much intel from him. But try to take him alive on the off chance he wants to brag about who they are and what they're doing.'
'Understood. Martin out.'
'Wilson out.'

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'Blue Two to Blue Leader.'
'Blue Leader.'
'We're behind the shooter. He has multiple weapons. Thompson is moving up with the tranquilizer gun on the most target's most exposed side.'
'Roger. Keep me updated. Blue Leader out.'
'Blue Two out.'

BANG!

Ching!

Spthump!

'Blue Two to Blue Leader.'
'Blue Leader.'
'Shooter is down with the tranq.'
'Good work. Get pictures and then police the area.'
'Ten minutes. Blue Two out.'
'Blue Leader out.'

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'Colonel Wilson from Captain Martin.'
'Wilson.'
'Shooter is unconscious and will be out for about 20 minutes. Where will you be interrogating him?'
'Take him to the top of the hill he was on. That's the closest place that's still a safe distance from the wreck. Check his teeth, his pockets, his fingernails, his toenails and any other likely places for a suicide pill. I'll be there in 10 to lead the way.'
'Roger. Martin out.'
'Wilson out.'

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There's an old house up there with a small barn and a lot of dry hay. The older couple that owned the place died last year and it's still tied up in court with some of the kids trying to break the old man's will which left the property to the County as a place for a new library branch. Tom Devers drew up that will and I'm confident those greedy kids are banging their heads against an iron wall. It won't be the first time someone in a family contested a will Tom drew up but so far, it's Tom nine and whiners zero. I think we'll get that new library.

We're in the barn and our shooter is in skivvies and nothing else so he's been thoroughly searched and he's well secured with handcuffs and leg shackles and a very good blindfold. He's beginning to come around so he should wake to the sight and sound of large, wicked blades being sharpened…

"Mohammed? Is that you sharpening your weapon to set me free? Mohammed?"

It seems the 'Snick! Snick!' of a whetstone moving over a blade is a familiar sound but not a pleasant one when he doesn't know who's doing the sharpening.

"Not to set you free but to free your tongue about who sent you and what else they have planned."
"You're not Mohammed! Where am I? Who are you?"
"Take a deep breath. Does it smell like a barn? Wiggle your toes. Feel the straw around your feet? That and the other dry things in here will burn very fast and fire seems an appropriate way of dealing with someone who was involved in the fire deaths of many children."
"NO! I harmed no children! We just stopped the tanks of evil death from being sent to Iraq!"
"No, stupid. Those tanks are headed for the weapons destruction facility. Your group's actions have killed more than 200 civilians with half of those being children. Tell me, can a good Muslim claim his seventy virgins if he no longer has the ability to make use of them?"
"Let go of me! Do not cut me! I must be whole to get my seventy virgins!"
"Remove the blindfold. Boy, look closely while I shave your arm with my knife."
"No! No!"
"I'll need to remove his last piece of clothing to do the needed surgery…"
"NO!!"
"…and my knife is more than sharp enough…"

Snip!

"…and almost as fast as good scissors. Which testicle should I take first? Left?"

"NO!!"

"Right?"

"NO!!"

"Perhaps just up the middle instea…"

"NO!! NO!! For Allah's sake, NO!!"

"Then tell me who sent you, where they are, who and where the others are and how you contact them?"

"No! I can't tell an infidel!"

"Then you lose half your testosterone…"

Snip!

"Aiiiee…"

"He's fainted, Colonel. That's perhaps the most effective use of ice that I've ever seen."

"Just an old college fraternity trick that almost always gets that response. Just need the blood from your medic. A bit of painting with the blood here and here, some tape here and dribble some more blood on it, a small puddle of blood on the seat of the wooden chair and let some run down the side of his leg and puddle by that foot. The two clamps I asked the medic for go here and here so he will have serious pain when he regains consciousness. Do we have a name for him?"

"Rasheem."

"Rasheem! Rasheem! I think he needs that cold water in his face."

Splash!

"Wha… Whe… Dear Allah I hurt! Did I fail Allah and miss paradise?"

"You're not dead yet, Rasheem, but if mutilation takes away your reward of virgins then take a good look where you hurt."

"I am no longer a whole man! I cannot enter paradis…"

"But you can be punished much more severely before you die. Answer my questions, Rasheem or I shall cut agai…"

"NO! NO! No more cuts! Ask me anything!"

"Captain, you have my list of questions. Keep good notes and keep the bloody knife in his line of vision."

"Will do, Colonel. Text you his answers?"

"That'll work, as I can send them up the line as needed."

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notyoung

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But consider the mind fog he will have when he discovers that he wasn't cut but he is certain that he was cut because of the blood and the pain - and he can't possibly ask "the infidels" he's in prison with to examine him.
 

feralferret

Veteran Member
Still a good read. Too bad your muse is AWOL. There are so many directions you could go with this.

Col. Jack Wilson is a "Git 'er done!" kind of guy.
 
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