Story Oh-Dark-Thirty

[john70]

great story

 

[Mr Bill]

Cool

 

[kua]

Pretty tense. A very good read. Thanks.

 

[teedee]

great short story! Thanks

 

[FMJ]

Thank you for all the comments. I'm glad you enjoyed the tale.

 

[wab54]

There is not any more to the story? It needs more chapters. Too good to stop.

wab

 

[Lone_Hawk]

I read the first couple of chapters years ago, I'm glad to have the opportunity to read the rest of it. Thank you FMJ!

 

[feralferret]

Just reread the story. First time was before I was a member so I couldn't like or comment. Good story, well worth the second read.

Thanks!