Story Market Day

ComCamGuy

Remote Paramedical pain in the ass
should be “weapons couriers”


UGRs… had to eat those damn things in Iraq. nasty!
as always, love the story!

They aren't bad when the cooks do more than heat and open them. They can be used as a base to make some good meals, as long as you have spices and knowledge. Think like the whole make a meal out of MREs writ large
 

Chapulin

Veteran Member
Truly guessing way over my skis but Kingfisher could be an addition to the story that joined us in this section, but was added after the draft we saw of the early story. IE the printed copy would have Kingfisher being added much earlier.

The amount of gear moving from Barstow to the Base will be hard to trim down for a future journey away from the base. A cliff or 2 may be necessary (should be expected?).
 

Griz3752

Retired, practising Curmudgeon
Truly guessing way over my skis but Kingfisher could be an addition to the story that joined us in this section, but was added after the draft we saw of the early story. IE the printed copy would have Kingfisher being added much earlier.

The amount of gear moving from Barstow to the Base will be hard to trim down for a future journey away from the base. A cliff or 2 may be necessary (should be expected?).
You know he's a free-associater and will run w/ that don't you?
 

Griz3752

Retired, practising Curmudgeon
They aren't bad when the cooks do more than heat and open them. They can be used as a base to make some good meals, as long as you have spices and knowledge. Think like the whole make a meal out of MREs writ large
Imagination and spices being key I guess. Get me hungry enough and I'll eat pretty much anything so long as it keeps me going; pretty sure tasty wasn't on the PO.
 

ComCamGuy

Remote Paramedical pain in the ass
Truly guessing way over my skis but Kingfisher could be an addition to the story that joined us in this section, but was added after the draft we saw of the early story. IE the printed copy would have Kingfisher being added much earlier.

The amount of gear moving from Barstow to the Base will be hard to trim down for a future journey away from the base. A cliff or 2 may be necessary (should be expected?).

Kingfisher never seems to be around when the get togethers happen, and the characters in 6 have mentioned it too
 

ComCamGuy

Remote Paramedical pain in the ass
Truly guessing way over my skis but Kingfisher could be an addition to the story that joined us in this section, but was added after the draft we saw of the early story. IE the printed copy would have Kingfisher being added much earlier.

The amount of gear moving from Barstow to the Base will be hard to trim down for a future journey away from the base. A cliff or 2 may be necessary (should be expected?).

# 6913
"Silas thought of the various issues of plausible deniability. He wouldn’t take any of the Musketeers. He didn’t want them linked to the wholesale raiding Kingfisher had been conducting. This was also the reason he and Ivar were keeping Kingfisher out of the weapons liberation. So, with them off the list, who else to take and in what vehicle? "

It is by design for now, I think....

Compartmentalization is done at the reflex level by these guys
 

ComCamGuy

Remote Paramedical pain in the ass
In the Marshaling Yard Late in the Night


Everyone was working hard, sorting and packing as much as they could while Petra was going back and forth making sure all the vehicles they were taking would run and make it to the base. As the others loaded the bus and trucks, Silas, Kingfisher and sometimes Brice would occasionally add stuff to the pick-up they drove down. What they added, nobody else saw.

Near dawn, Brice hijacked Petra to work on another vehicle they weren’t taking, a HEMTT Tractor with a flatbed trailer off to one side for another one of Brice’s deals.

As the sun rose and the crews finished, Brice had some food and coffee ready for them cooked over an open grill.
 

ComCamGuy

Remote Paramedical pain in the ass
Everyone split up into their vehicles for the convoy north. They had one less vehicle than they had people. The extra person ended up being Petra. Silas had her in the bus with him so he had an extra set of eyes. Or at least that was his excuse. He was quite fond of her and was feeling a bit protective right now. She could scamper across the boxes and stand up in one of the roof hatches if he needed her to keep an eye on other parts of the convoy. Kingfisher was the driver of the last vehicle, the pick-up they came in.

Silas would have put Petra in with Kingfisher, but he knew Kingfisher needed some alone time. Brice and Kingfisher still loved one another; they just couldn’t be married to one another. Their story was long and convoluted and Silas was there for most of the harder parts. Amber had both as patients during their break-up and divorce. The part that tore everyone up was they both loved each other so much and couldn’t understand why they couldn’t make it work.
 

Griz3752

Retired, practising Curmudgeon
My natural mother and father loved each other very much. However, their personalities were such that they could not live together. So I understand the situation.
Love is good; some folks love but can't be friends it seems. Personally I think being friends 1st is a decent foundation to build love and respect on but I've been divorced so obviously I don't know that much.

Hoping this one sticks (safe bet as it was late in life) but her family never cease to amaze. We'll see. .....
 

ComCamGuy

Remote Paramedical pain in the ass
In the Pick-Up Headed North


Kingfisher had a lot to think about as they drove North. These past couple of weeks seeing Brice was the first time in a long time he spent much time with her. The attraction between them was still there and just as strong as when they were kids. The difference was they were much older now and had so much history and knew their own failures and problems. Both of them knew as much as they loved one another, they just didn’t do well together.

Their fights were legendary when they were married. When you have known one another since before you knew words, you know all the buttons. She was his high school sweetheart. The first time they were apart was when she went into the service and he went to college. When he joined the Marines, one of the first things he did was marry her.

They were happy until the friction started building up. It kept building and building. They tried everything they could think of to make it work, including having children. Neither regret them having Kestrel but both are sorry they couldn’t find a way for her to grow up with both parents.

They have tried twice to get back together after their divorce but in the end, they both knew it wouldn’t work. Part of him still held out hope that the third time might be the charm, but he knew better in his heart, and he saw in her eyes she knew the same thing.

Brice asked him to come back down for Christmas to lend a hand with something and see Kestrel. He had to work a few things out but Ivar would understand. His was the last vehicle in the string and left his mind free to wander.
 
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Chapulin

Veteran Member
I feel comfortable telling the author where his story has put what is left of my mind. Putting money on the table about which characters will be medical cases for the kitchen table and who dies for a vertical grave will soon be lost.
 

Griz3752

Retired, practising Curmudgeon
I feel comfortable telling the author where his story has put what is left of my mind. Putting money on the table about which characters will be medical cases for the kitchen table and who dies for a vertical grave will soon be lost.
A precise appreciation of our circumstances. That's why I just wait for the whole thing to unfold as its written.
 

ComCamGuy

Remote Paramedical pain in the ass
told the wife, she said "don't give me ideas"

You guys have to remember, she is my evil muse, when I told her about you guys laughing at her saying don’t give me ideas, she started saying things like “well, shoot, after Paige and Crew leave, everyone is on the table….” And her gears started to whirl.

she was the one who came up with Veronica being bit by a dog as a kid…not realizing where I would head with it….

i know where things are headed, and so does she. She knows who needs to be there, and more importantly, who doesn’t.

it gets interesting when we write together….
 

FireDance

TB Fanatic
You guys have to remember, she is my evil muse, when I told her about you guys laughing at her saying don’t give me ideas, she started saying things like “well, shoot, after Paige and Crew leave, everyone is on the table….” And her gears started to whirl.

she was the one who came up with Veronica being bit by a dog as a kid…not realizing where I would head with it….

i know where things are headed, and so does she. She knows who needs to be there, and more importantly, who doesn’t.

it gets interesting when we write together….
Actually sounds like a lot of fun! Glad you guys can share this tome. A woman with “evil ideas” can really take this into a place we may never think about…. Love it!
 

Griz3752

Retired, practising Curmudgeon
Sounds like, as the editor has apparently segued into authorship, a change in "credits" might be appropriate. If not here, then on the published version, no matter what format is selected.

The female mind can bring a whole new level of bad into a tale (or, as often experienced in my previous AOs, in life too.)

Credit given where due and all that.
 

ComCamGuy

Remote Paramedical pain in the ass
Sounds like, as the editor has apparently segued into authorship, a change in "credits" might be appropriate. If not here, then on the published version, no matter what format is selected.

The female mind can bring a whole new level of bad into a tale (or, as often experienced in my previous AOs, in life too.)

Credit given where due and all that.

She won’t accept anything higher than contributing editor, but she is the mastermind behind a few transformations and added depth within the story
 

Lone_Hawk

Resident Spook
You guys have to remember, she is my evil muse, when I told her about you guys laughing at her saying don’t give me ideas, she started saying things like “well, shoot, after Paige and Crew leave, everyone is on the table….” And her gears started to whirl.

she was the one who came up with Veronica being bit by a dog as a kid…not realizing where I would head with it….

i know where things are headed, and so does she. She knows who needs to be there, and more importantly, who doesn’t.

it gets interesting when we write together….

That Sir is some scary shit...
 

ComCamGuy

Remote Paramedical pain in the ass
I have an update waiting in my computer but the work gremlins are at play. work pushed a patch for changing "office" versions so we are now all listed as 'unlicensed' for any of our programs. It might be this evening before it gets straightened out and I can post it. As the voice tree says, "Please be Patient"
 

Griz3752

Retired, practising Curmudgeon
I have an update waiting in my computer but the work gremlins are at play. work pushed a patch for changing "office" versions so we are now all listed as 'unlicensed' for any of our programs. It might be this evening before it gets straightened out and I can post it. As the voice tree says, "Please be Patient"
I often remind myself of the oft-repeated lie: "Technology is my friend, Technology is my friend,......."

Personally, I'm in no rush; there's lots to review . ......
 

ComCamGuy

Remote Paramedical pain in the ass
In the Bus


The bus was a beast for Silas to drive. It was big, bulky and overloaded. He was horsing the thing through the curves at what felt like a snail’s pace but any faster and he felt unstable. Most people don’t get a lot of experience driving something with the turning wheels behind them. It really throws off the feel.

After a short while of this, he was regretting the government’s choice to not have radios in them. He could use some music or some other distraction. When he told Petra this, she whipped out her phone and a charger. The little speakers in the phone were a little hard to hear over the sound of the bus’s engine but they made do.

Silas was impressed with the wide variety she had in her playlists. Most of the stuff from the 80’s and 90’s and a few from the 2000’s he recognized. Soon it digressed into a sing along in the bus. He was right. It was a good distraction and kept him a little better focused on the road. All was good until the phone kicked over into another playlist.

This new playlist was full of dark-themed symphonic rock with angry or sad women in it. There were still a few he recognized for a soundtrack here and there. These Petra seemed to connect much deeper with, belting out the songs with full abandonment. Silas was impressed. The girl had some pipes on her and a sound much bigger than you would expect from her tiny frame. One song seemed to repeat several times in the list. It had a more upbeat flavor but was all about letting go and moving on and shattered dreams.

Silas glanced over at the phone, trying to see the name of the song. All he saw was the Disney logo at his quick glance. Well, that explains it. Bright catchy sounding toon for some dark as hell story, because if you broke most their movies down and identified the elements, they could just as easily be things written by Edger Allen Poe. They were full of dead parents, abandoned kids and evil villains when you really looked closely. On the plus side, the tunes were usually good.
 
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