blackguard
Veteran Member
A big thank you to all those who have taken the time to read Withdrawal. I would like to request your help, I definitely plan on finishing the story and publishing it. So to that end if you would take a few moments of your time and answer as many of the following questions as you care to it would help me be a better writer and in the end produce a better story. So please share your feedback positive and especially negative. Thank you so much.
1. Do the characters seem "real"? Do you see them as people or just names ?
2. Is the story line plausible? Could those things happen?
3. Does the story keep your interest? Do you want to keep going?
4. What mistakes did you see? Technical flaws, continuity issues, etc
5. Does the timeline of the story "feel" right to you?
6. What if any emotions does the story invoke in you?
7. At any point do you lose interest in the story?
8. Are you able to keep a sufficient mental picture of the scenes as the story progresses? Are the details provided enough?
Thank you again
1. Do the characters seem "real"? Do you see them as people or just names ?
2. Is the story line plausible? Could those things happen?
3. Does the story keep your interest? Do you want to keep going?
4. What mistakes did you see? Technical flaws, continuity issues, etc
5. Does the timeline of the story "feel" right to you?
6. What if any emotions does the story invoke in you?
7. At any point do you lose interest in the story?
8. Are you able to keep a sufficient mental picture of the scenes as the story progresses? Are the details provided enough?
Thank you again