CORP/BIZ Excellent book called Potters Run

jward

passin' thru
I am working on the sequel to Potters' Run. It will be titled Potter's Stand and I hope to have it done early summer. I was hoping to have it done sooner, but a job has come up that I have to take.
Glad you figured out the software. Thanks for joining us

WRT the first installment, two quick thoughts uppermost in my mind at the moment is that I hope the sheriff’s mind isn’t completely made up about Craig (?).. mine isn’t.

I also wondered about the first/only strong female character being “a bit o’ a tomboy”. Did she just happen to be born that way, or will we learn that all of the females in this world, who’ve the spirit and skill set(s) to rise to the level of competency she exhibits, have had to, in some fashion, eschew their femininity and mimic a more traditionally male psyche? :hmm:

Glad also to learn there’s not too long of wait for the next book- I hope memorial day qualifies as 'early summer'?- I like to remind people that finished writing projects are one o’ my favorite BD treats. Not that my hints, ever so subtle, or otherwise, have ever actually worked out, but, it’s as good a day as any other and would clear the holiday weekend for ya if you did have er wrapped up by then. :: shrug ::

Anyway, thanks again. Enjoyed thus far.. my only "complaint" would be that we have had to turn to fiction to find people responding to the situation in the ways these things ultimately require.
Oh- and I adored the mules, and hope we get to see much more o' em. Assuming you can't find reason to insert an elephant or two in there somewhere. That would be even better!
 

Cardinal

Chickministrator
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Any possibility of it coming out in audiobook form?
I listen to most of my books.
 

writerrecluse

Contributing Member
Jward,

Glad you figured out the software. Thanks for joining us

WRT the first installment, two quick thoughts uppermost in my mind at the moment is that I hope the sheriff’s mind isn’t completely made up about Craig (?).. mine isn’t.

I also wondered about the first/only strong female character being “a bit o’ a tomboy”. Did she just happen to be born that way, or will we learn that all of the females in this world, who’ve the spirit and skill set(s) to rise to the level of competency she exhibits, have had to, in some fashion, eschew their femininity and mimic a more traditionally male psyche? :hmm:

Glad also to learn there’s not too long of wait for the next book- I hope memorial day qualifies as 'early summer'?- I like to remind people that finished writing projects are one o’ my favorite BD treats. Not that my hints, ever so subtle, or otherwise, have ever actually worked out, but, it’s as good a day as any other and would clear the holiday weekend for ya if you did have er wrapped up by then. :: shrug ::

Anyway, thanks again. Enjoyed thus far.. my only "complaint" would be that we have had to turn to fiction to find people responding to the situation in the ways these things ultimately require.
Oh- and I adored the mules, and hope we get to see much more o' em. Assuming you can't find reason to insert an elephant or two in there somewhere. That would be even better!
Glad you figured out the software. Thanks for joining us

WRT the first installment, two quick thoughts uppermost in my mind at the moment is that I hope the sheriff’s mind isn’t completely made up about Craig (?).. mine isn’t.

I also wondered about the first/only strong female character being “a bit o’ a tomboy”. Did she just happen to be born that way, or will we learn that all of the females in this world, who’ve the spirit and skill set(s) to rise to the level of competency she exhibits, have had to, in some fashion, eschew their femininity and mimic a more traditionally male psyche? :hmm:

Glad also to learn there’s not too long of wait for the next book- I hope memorial day qualifies as 'early summer'?- I like to remind people that finished writing projects are one o’ my favorite BD treats. Not that my hints, ever so subtle, or otherwise, have ever actually worked out, but, it’s as good a day as any other and would clear the holiday weekend for ya if you did have er wrapped up by then. :: shrug ::

Anyway, thanks again. Enjoyed thus far.. my only "complaint" would be that we have had to turn to fiction to find people responding to the situation in the ways these things ultimately require.
Oh- and I adored the mules, and hope we get to see much more o' em. Assuming you can't find reason to insert an elephant or two in there somewhere. That would be even better!
Hey, Thanks!


I really like strong female characters and I think that most often their real strength is the femininity, Jane was a little different though. Part good old fashioned tomboy, part modern mixed up kid. The characters get to a point where they kind of write themselves and she turned out not only to be strong herself, but often the strength Tom needed and the strength he continues to learn from.
I don't want to give anything away about the Craig character.
And the mules were a lot of fun, they started out as horses, but as I researched and wrote, they had to be mules.
Also, sorry for it taking so long to reply, I am forever wrestling with uncooperative satellite internet, unless I head into town.
 

writerrecluse

Contributing Member
Any possibility of it coming out in audiobook form?
I listen to most of my books.

I would love to make an audio book. I experimented with narrating it myself and quickly realized there's a lot more to it than reading your own book into a digital recorder. I don't have the voice, the training, the equipment or the studio to do it properly. Unfortunately at this time I also don't have the means to pay someone who has all those things to do it. If the book really takes off, I will absolutely make that a priority.
 

Cardinal

Chickministrator
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I would love to make an audio book. I experimented with narrating it myself and quickly realized there's a lot more to it than reading your own book into a digital recorder. I don't have the voice, the training, the equipment or the studio to do it properly. Unfortunately at this time I also don't have the means to pay someone who has all those things to do it. If the book really takes off, I will absolutely make that a priority.
Yeah, there is a lot that goes into that.
Perusing the Net, I did find this:

I may try this with yours and see how it works.
Will report back on it.
 

writerrecluse

Contributing Member
Yeah, there is a lot that goes into that.
Perusing the Net, I did find this:

I may try this with yours and see how it works.
Will report back on it.
That's a great idea, I didn't think about anything like that. I'm a little slow on the tech side. In fact my idea of using advanced technology is usually along the lines of using the hydraulic splitter instead of the maul, which I actually need to go do right now!
 

Cardinal

Chickministrator
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OK, still playing with that app, but found a much simpler way (DUH).
Downloaded Alexa and told it to read the book to me.
Works like a charm.
Or an A.I. Heh.
 

writerrecluse

Contributing Member
OK, still playing with that app, but found a much simpler way (DUH).
Downloaded Alexa and told it to read the book to me.
Works like a charm.
Or an A.I. Heh.
Oh, cool, I'm glad that works. Stuff like Alexa scares me though. I'll stick with my hydraulic splitter because it doesn't talk to me.
Is it ok to post a link to one of my youtube videos here? It's something folks might be interested in regarding the sequel.
 

Cardinal

Chickministrator
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Oh, cool, I'm glad that works. Stuff like Alexa scares me though. I'll stick with my hydraulic splitter because it doesn't talk to me.
Is it ok to post a link to one of my youtube videos here? It's something folks might be interested in regarding the sequel.
Go for it.
Please include runtime for those who, like you, have limited bandwidth.
 

gunwish

Senior Member
Heres a link to a 5 minute youtube video I made while doing some research for Potter's Stand.

View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AsZnk2eeHXc
Thanks for sharing that video. Surviving in cold weather is something that I am trying to learn myself. I see now why your stories seem so realistic. You base the situations in your books on real life knowledge and data. Not just making things up as you go.
 

writerrecluse

Contributing Member
Thanks for sharing that video. Surviving in cold weather is something that I am trying to learn myself. I see now why your stories seem so realistic. You base the situations in your books on real life knowledge and data. Not just making things up as you go.

Thanks, I am by no means an expert on anything, but I do try to provide my readers a level of realism they might not find elsewhere. To get that, I figure I owe it to my readers and my characters to have some idea what I'm putting them through.

Here's the trailer my sons and I put together for Potters' Run for anyone interested:
ETA: oops, sorry trailer is just about 1 minute long.

View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FCHeq60arpw
 
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gunwish

Senior Member
Jward,



Hey, Thanks!


I really like strong female characters and I think that most often their real strength is the femininity, Jane was a little different though. Part good old fashioned tomboy, part modern mixed up kid. The characters get to a point where they kind of write themselves and she turned out not only to be strong herself, but often the strength Tom needed and the strength he continues to learn from.
I don't want to give anything away about the Craig character.
And the mules were a lot of fun, they started out as horses, but as I researched and wrote, they had to be mules.
Also, sorry for it taking so long to reply, I am forever wrestling with uncooperative satellite internet, unless I head into town.
Two things:

One
I liked Jane. I thought you did well with her. To me she seemed like a person that was starting her own life and trying to figure out what she wanted out of life. Rebelling against her father and the way she was raised, but also clinging to it. She just didn't know how important what her father taught her was going to be. One of those life lessons that you can't fully understand until you go through it. I was like that at her age. Striving to be on my own and running from how I was raised, but not sure where I was going. Like everyone else, we have to go through life to figure our own life out.

Two
If you want to share, what satellite internet do you have? The geek in me is curious.
 

gunwish

Senior Member
Thanks, I am by no means an expert on anything, but I do try to provide my readers a level of realism they might not find elsewhere. To get that, I figure I owe it to my readers and my characters to have some idea what I'm putting them through.

Here's the trailer my sons and I put together for Potters' Run for anyone interested:

View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FCHeq60arpw
A book with a preview is even better! Nicely down video

Make sure you list the video runtime when posting a video
 

writerrecluse

Contributing Member
Two things:

One
I liked Jane. I thought you did well with her. To me she seemed like a person that was starting her own life and trying to figure out what she wanted out of life. Rebelling against her father and the way she was raised, but also clinging to it. She just didn't know how important what her father taught her was going to be. One of those life lessons that you can't fully understand until you go through it. I was like that at her age. Striving to be on my own and running from how I was raised, but not sure where I was going. Like everyone else, we have to go through life to figure our own life out.

Two
If you want to share, what satellite internet do you have? The geek in me is curious.
**walks back from looking at dish**

Hughes Net. very expensive and inefficient and as soon as the last kid is done with high school I'm taking that dish out back to shoot with something that starts with at least a .4

And thanks for the insightful analysis of Jane. I've found myself unemployed over the past year as I was one of those strange people that didn't think this shot everyone was so excited about was right for me or our family. So, job of 12 years gone, I fully devoted myself to this book and it's sequel and I was really able to pour my heart into it and I think that helped a lot. And I was able to really reflect on a lot of things as a father and incorporate that with a loose framework of the history of the shootout at the Powers cabin in 1917 adjusted for where we seem to be headed today.
 

CGTech

Has No Life - Lives on TB
Ok, i'm in, just bought it. Have to finish reading another one first by another person on this forum.
 

Cardinal

Chickministrator
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**walks back from looking at dish**

Hughes Net. very expensive and inefficient and as soon as the last kid is done with high school I'm taking that dish out back to shoot with something that starts with at least a .4

And thanks for the insightful analysis of Jane. I've found myself unemployed over the past year as I was one of those strange people that didn't think this shot everyone was so excited about was right for me or our family. So, job of 12 years gone, I fully devoted myself to this book and it's sequel and I was really able to pour my heart into it and I think that helped a lot. And I was able to really reflect on a lot of things as a father and incorporate that with a loose framework of the history of the shootout at the Powers cabin in 1917 adjusted for where we seem to be headed today.
Check to see if you can get wifi thru Verizon. I have it, works great and I'm in the mountains. Twenty five bux a month.
 

writerrecluse

Contributing Member
Check to see if you can get wifi thru Verizon. I have it, works great and I'm in the mountains. Twenty five bux a month.
Thanks, I'll check that out. I think we're kind of limited, the wife and kids are constantly looking for options. The only other thing they've talked about was Starlink, which sounded kind of fun and I liked the idea that it could be portable.
 

jward

passin' thru
One
I liked Jane. I thought you did well with her. To me she seemed like a person that was starting her own life and trying to figure out what she wanted out of life. Rebelling against her father and the way she was raised, but also clinging to it. She just didn't know how important what her father taught her was going to be

I too liked Jane. I wanted to know though that she'd 'been born that way' (and yes, characters tell you who they are, and we write down their stories, we don't "invent" them) anyway, that it wasn't a case of having to recast a female as masculine in order to ascribe her exceptional competency in traditional male fields. That would have been a false note, given the rest of the novels' notes of realism, I would have been disappointed.
Wimmen aren't one trick ponies or mules, and can, and usually are, far more complex and well able to move effortlessly from the dance floor to the shooting range to the-

And yeah, definitely authentic portrayal o' that stage o' teen life lol. Anyway. Agree. Glad to have met her.
 

jward

passin' thru
Oh no. Hughes net eh.

Abandon hope all ye who enter
is the sign on their front door.
I was out last night in nighty and boots sweepin' debris off the dish, which sometimes helps, but most often does not, because, as indicated, they are the spawn o' satan.

Oddly nuff, mine is also double posting, fading in and out and what not, just in general acting out.
 

writerrecluse

Contributing Member
Ah, in town where snow fall and solar activity seems to have less impact on internet...
Wouldn't trade it for anything though.

Jane was one of the characters that surprised me as I wrote in terms of significance, the other was the Sheriff. He started out as a very minor character actually and was derived from a short story that I wrote years ago.

One of the reasons I was drawn to the story of the Powers cabin shootout and why I wanted to wrap a modern novel around it was that I really see us sliding inevitably toward a new global war. I spent 15 years in places like Iraq, Afghanistan and worse, just as a filthy contractor. But what I experienced showed me that broader war will be terrible no matter how they dress it up, even if it stays conventional.

Occasionally some one like Jeff Power in 1917 stands up and says no. If a whole community stands up and says no, what happens? Is the coming war really necessary? Recruiting numbers are terribly low right now, a draft will be necessary for a major conflict. And with everyone being equal, it will be time to start drafting women, right?

I'm not smart enough to have a lot of answers, but I'm at least smart enough to have an awful lot of questions. Shouldn't we be asking these things now, before we start sending sons and daughters off to war yet again?
 

teedee

Veteran Member
I am surprised that no one else has mentioned your 2 other books on Amazon. I love aircraft fiction and it is very seldom that I find some as good as yours were. Thanks for the enjoyment!!
 

writerrecluse

Contributing Member
I am surprised that no one else has mentioned your 2 other books on Amazon. I love aircraft fiction and it is very seldom that I find some as good as yours were. Thanks for the enjoyment!!
Oh, cool, thanks! That is really my comfort zone, honestly, I love writing airplanes. That and the paranormal military stuff. Those appeal to a much smaller audience, which is probably also a part of what makes it comfortable to me. I actually find it hard not to slip some kind of flying into a book.
 

jward

passin' thru
I’m relatively new to geopolitical study. Most o’ my life, I honored what I thought was the social contract- limited myself to less demanding careers so I could do my real life’s work making healthy happy home for my men and children. See, I got the idea somewhere that making moral, spiritually/emotionally/mentally/physically healthy people was understood to be my role in society... my contribution to its highest good, and that others were tasked with the oversight and application of political and defense matters. I was incredibly good at my job, and assumed the others were likewise exceptional at theirs.

Once I buried my family and faced the spectre o’ half my life w/o em, I looked around for some other, completely different, focus for my energy, to give me a time for healing, and took up learning of the Great Game and how it’s been played. Only then did I realize that I’d abdicated my responsibility and that each and every one of us need keep an eagle eye on our institutions, always, or else run the risk of the ruin we now see before us.

Even though I’m a novice, and mostly self-taught, I think it’s clear that we are IN ww3 already. I don’t watch TV or use MSM, but even limiting myself to source material and a few voice whom I respect and trust, that much seems clear. I’ve watched the shifting alliances, the defense budgets ballooning all across the globe, country after country “suddenly” reworking it’s defense principles to include more robust actions, reworking their nuclear permissions and protocols, defense contractors’ old stock flying off the shelves while their new monsters are being field tested and demand for their products sky rocket, while they all ramp up their production capacities and all the countries suddenly doubling down on their social programs to reverse the tide of declining birth rates, and the writing on the wall seems unmistakable.

I don’t know if saying no- declining to participate= will work. I’ve often suggested- earlier in the game, particularly- that instead o’ this impotent complaining from behind the comfort of our screens, we should try a tienamens square incident of our own. Take our older, worn bodies en masse to our “betters” and tell em fine, you want us dead? Skip the convoluted machinations of the shots, and the wars, the destruction of our economies, businesses, food supplies, and mental/emotional health. Here we are, take us now, or we take you to the fair trials, and then the accommodations at LV, that you’ve earned.

You’ve demonized us, legalized slapping labels upon we innocent men/women and granted yourselves ::spit:: the “legal rights” to kill us w/o due process... So, here. Now. In front o’ God and the cameras and everyone, do it.

I don’t believe it would work, as the fear of bad press and public opinion is no longer much of a factor with them. Still, it seems clear that fixing this fubar is going to require some bleeding, crying and dying. The sooner we realize we can’t all hunker down in safety and wait for that other guy to do those things for us, the sooner we can start to do the real work that is in front of us.

Which circles back to the reason your sheriff was also a favorite character of mine. He’s the men (and women!) that I grew up knowing, living amongst and loving. Folks with enough fortitude and character to see what was wrong and what needed to be done to make it right, then got busy gettin' er done. I miss those people, and it seems, with every outrage by our global governments that is met with acquiescence, that these days they are only found in the graveyards and pages o’ novels such as yours.

Hopefully there are many many o’ em still this side o’ the veil, working a plan, like the men in your novel, to right these wrongs and help us get back on course. I don’t hear their voices lifted in the discourse though, the public square seems full o’ the same tired, self serving substandard nonsense as that which got us here in the first place. :: shrug :: but, at least, we have voices in our stories that are lifted up, saying and doing the hard, but correct, words/deeds.

Ah, in town where snow fall and solar activity seems to have less impact on internet...
Wouldn't trade it for anything though.

Jane was one of the characters that surprised me as I wrote in terms of significance, the other was the Sheriff. He started out as a very minor character actually and was derived from a short story that I wrote years ago.

One of the reasons I was drawn to the story of the Powers cabin shootout and why I wanted to wrap a modern novel around it was that I really see us sliding inevitably toward a new global war. I spent 15 years in places like Iraq, Afghanistan and worse, just as a filthy contractor. But what I experienced showed me that broader war will be terrible no matter how they dress it up, even if it stays conventional.

Occasionally some one like Jeff Power in 1917 stands up and says no. If a whole community stands up and says no, what happens? Is the coming war really necessary? Recruiting numbers are terribly low right now, a draft will be necessary for a major conflict. And with everyone being equal, it will be time to start drafting women, right?

I'm not smart enough to have a lot of answers, but I'm at least smart enough to have an awful lot of questions. Shouldn't we be asking these things now, before we start sending sons and daughters off to war yet again?
 

writerrecluse

Contributing Member
I’m relatively new to geopolitical study. Most o’ my life, I honored what I thought was the social contract- limited myself to less demanding careers so I could do my real life’s work making healthy happy home for my men and children. See, I got the idea somewhere that making moral, spiritually/emotionally/mentally/physically healthy people was understood to be my role in society... my contribution to its highest good, and that others were tasked with the oversight and application of political and defense matters. I was incredibly good at my job, and assumed the others were likewise exceptional at theirs.

Once I buried my family and faced the spectre o’ half my life w/o em, I looked around for some other, completely different, focus for my energy, to give me a time for healing, and took up learning of the Great Game and how it’s been played. Only then did I realize that I’d abdicated my responsibility and that each and every one of us need keep an eagle eye on our institutions, always, or else run the risk of the ruin we now see before us.

Even though I’m a novice, and mostly self-taught, I think it’s clear that we are IN ww3 already. I don’t watch TV or use MSM, but even limiting myself to source material and a few voice whom I respect and trust, that much seems clear. I’ve watched the shifting alliances, the defense budgets ballooning all across the globe, country after country “suddenly” reworking it’s defense principles to include more robust actions, reworking their nuclear permissions and protocols, defense contractors’ old stock flying off the shelves while their new monsters are being field tested and demand for their products sky rocket, while they all ramp up their production capacities and all the countries suddenly doubling down on their social programs to reverse the tide of declining birth rates, and the writing on the wall seems unmistakable.

I don’t know if saying no- declining to participate= will work. I’ve often suggested- earlier in the game, particularly- that instead o’ this impotent complaining from behind the comfort of our screens, we should try a tienamens square incident of our own. Take our older, worn bodies en masse to our “betters” and tell em fine, you want us dead? Skip the convoluted machinations of the shots, and the wars, the destruction of our economies, businesses, food supplies, and mental/emotional health. Here we are, take us now, or we take you to the fair trials, and then the accommodations at LV, that you’ve earned.

You’ve demonized us, legalized slapping labels upon we innocent men/women and granted yourselves ::spit:: the “legal rights” to kill us w/o due process... So, here. Now. In front o’ God and the cameras and everyone, do it.

I don’t believe it would work, as the fear of bad press and public opinion is no longer much of a factor with them. Still, it seems clear that fixing this fubar is going to require some bleeding, crying and dying. The sooner we realize we can’t all hunker down in safety and wait for that other guy to do those things for us, the sooner we can start to do the real work that is in front of us.

Which circles back to the reason your sheriff was also a favorite character of mine. He’s the men (and women!) that I grew up knowing, living amongst and loving. Folks with enough fortitude and character to see what was wrong and what needed to be done to make it right, then got busy gettin' er done. I miss those people, and it seems, with every outrage by our global governments that is met with acquiescence, that these days they are only found in the graveyards and pages o’ novels such as yours.

Hopefully there are many many o’ em still this side o’ the veil, working a plan, like the men in your novel, to right these wrongs and help us get back on course. I don’t hear their voices lifted in the discourse though, the public square seems full o’ the same tired, self serving substandard nonsense as that which got us here in the first place. :: shrug :: but, at least, we have voices in our stories that are lifted up, saying and doing the hard, but correct, words/deeds.
I’m relatively new to geopolitical study. Most o’ my life, I honored what I thought was the social contract- limited myself to less demanding careers so I could do my real life’s work making healthy happy home for my men and children. See, I got the idea somewhere that making moral, spiritually/emotionally/mentally/physically healthy people was understood to be my role in society... my contribution to its highest good, and that others were tasked with the oversight and application of political and defense matters. I was incredibly good at my job, and assumed the others were likewise exceptional at theirs.

Once I buried my family and faced the spectre o’ half my life w/o em, I looked around for some other, completely different, focus for my energy, to give me a time for healing, and took up learning of the Great Game and how it’s been played. Only then did I realize that I’d abdicated my responsibility and that each and every one of us need keep an eagle eye on our institutions, always, or else run the risk of the ruin we now see before us.

Even though I’m a novice, and mostly self-taught, I think it’s clear that we are IN ww3 already. I don’t watch TV or use MSM, but even limiting myself to source material and a few voice whom I respect and trust, that much seems clear. I’ve watched the shifting alliances, the defense budgets ballooning all across the globe, country after country “suddenly” reworking it’s defense principles to include more robust actions, reworking their nuclear permissions and protocols, defense contractors’ old stock flying off the shelves while their new monsters are being field tested and demand for their products sky rocket, while they all ramp up their production capacities and all the countries suddenly doubling down on their social programs to reverse the tide of declining birth rates, and the writing on the wall seems unmistakable.

I don’t know if saying no- declining to participate= will work. I’ve often suggested- earlier in the game, particularly- that instead o’ this impotent complaining from behind the comfort of our screens, we should try a tienamens square incident of our own. Take our older, worn bodies en masse to our “betters” and tell em fine, you want us dead? Skip the convoluted machinations of the shots, and the wars, the destruction of our economies, businesses, food supplies, and mental/emotional health. Here we are, take us now, or we take you to the fair trials, and then the accommodations at LV, that you’ve earned.

You’ve demonized us, legalized slapping labels upon we innocent men/women and granted yourselves ::spit:: the “legal rights” to kill us w/o due process... So, here. Now. In front o’ God and the cameras and everyone, do it.

I don’t believe it would work, as the fear of bad press and public opinion is no longer much of a factor with them. Still, it seems clear that fixing this fubar is going to require some bleeding, crying and dying. The sooner we realize we can’t all hunker down in safety and wait for that other guy to do those things for us, the sooner we can start to do the real work that is in front of us.

Which circles back to the reason your sheriff was also a favorite character of mine. He’s the men (and women!) that I grew up knowing, living amongst and loving. Folks with enough fortitude and character to see what was wrong and what needed to be done to make it right, then got busy gettin' er done. I miss those people, and it seems, with every outrage by our global governments that is met with acquiescence, that these days they are only found in the graveyards and pages o’ novels such as yours.

Hopefully there are many many o’ em still this side o’ the veil, working a plan, like the men in your novel, to right these wrongs and help us get back on course. I don’t hear their voices lifted in the discourse though, the public square seems full o’ the same tired, self serving substandard nonsense as that which got us here in the first place. :: shrug :: but, at least, we have voices in our stories that are lifted up, saying and doing the hard, but correct, words/deeds.

Wow...
First, I'm sorry for the suffering you've endured, I can't imagine.
Second, I agree, years from now, we will recognize the war started a while ago
Third, thanks for without realizing it, affirming the direction of the sequel. I was afraid I might be jumping the shark with it. But there's a time to run, a time to stand and a time to fight. I see this as a trilogy. Potters' Run, Potter's Stand and finally Potter's War.
Fourth, that was an amazing post, wow.
 

jward

passin' thru
well as long as you're already in the mood to expand your project, I think those that have referred to you as a clancy-esque type story teller might be on to something. They are also right, in my estimation, that you hit the right spot w/ re: to flying details- enough to be interesting and let us know you're speaking from experience, but not enough to bore or lose the reader. All to say, you might consider a larger/more commercially ambitious project.


Also wanted to mention that just a few days ago, some folk in Denver got stranded out on their snowmobiles and made one of those snow caves to stay warm till they were rescued- thought that interesting and showed what you thought of as mere research has real utility.



I remind myself I'm not well versed in all this "war stuff" so I must be wrong about #3 already out of the starting gate- but then I see another lil dot, like the one I just posted re: taiwan reworking their mobilization act and that their creating a list of all their men and women from age 16 was "only for emergency" and the fog/hope clears and I'm left to again face that the war is here. now.

ok. no more coffee for me lol.
 

writerrecluse

Contributing Member
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well as long as you're already in the mood to expand your project, I think those that have referred to you as a clancy-esque type story teller might be on to something. They are also right, in my estimation, that you hit the right spot w/ re: to flying details- enough to be interesting and let us know you're speaking from experience, but not enough to bore or lose the reader. All to say, you might consider a larger/more commercially ambitious project.


Also wanted to mention that just a few days ago, some folk in Denver got stranded out on their snowmobiles and made one of those snow caves to stay warm till they were rescued- thought that interesting and showed what you thought of as mere research has real utility.



I remind myself I'm not well versed in all this "war stuff" so I must be wrong about #3 already out of the starting gate- but then I see another lil dot, like the one I just posted re: taiwan reworking their mobilization act and that their creating a list of all their men and women from age 16 was "only for emergency" and the fog/hope clears and I'm left to again face that the war is here. now.

ok. no more coffee for me lol.
I've been out banging on my hughes net dish trying to get my response out.
 

Cardinal

Chickministrator
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Wow...
First, I'm sorry for the suffering you've endured, I can't imagine.
Second, I agree, years from now, we will recognize the war started a while ago
Third, thanks for without realizing it, affirming the direction of the sequel. I was afraid I might be jumping the shark with it. But there's a time to run, a time to stand and a time to fight. I see this as a trilogy. Potters' Run, Potter's Stand and finally Potter's War.
Fourth, that was an amazing post, wow.
YES!!!!
Just finished the first book.
Totally engrossing.
When I get a minute I will give it a good review on Amazon, maybe head on over to Goodreads as well.
 

AlaskaSue

North to the Future
Heres a link to a 5 minute youtube video I made while doing some research for Potter's Stand.

View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AsZnk2eeHXc
Super video, thanks! And Welcome! I'm just getting started on your book ~~

My sons attended school in good ol' Anchorage and one of the teachers took all the jr hi boys out for an overnight winter camp each year (the girls attended the opera with the Art Teacher and me). This was exactly what Mr Elson taught the boys (and I wish the girls could have learned too)! My youngest son and a friend were stranded above Matanuska Glacier for a couple days one winter during intense storms - this is literally what saved their lives because the snow and wind destroyed their tents. The ski plane was a couple days late due to the storm, but thankfully the guys were prepped.

Thanks for sharing your video!
 
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