Story Market Day

ComCamGuy

Remote Paramedical pain in the ass
Doug found a small corner to curl up for the night. He dug into an old, empty burrow in the side of the creek’s cut walls. He pulled several cattails to eat the roots. The fat brown heads went into a pocket for either tinder or fluffed up for insulation. A chunk of Tyvek that normally stayed folded in with his water bladder got used to scoop up leaves and pine needles to become insulation under him. He didn’t want to use it over him since it was white and would be easily seen. He spent some time filtering water and reloading his water containers.

Although he was able to get the cattails, he didn’t get much in the way of crayfish or fish. He would have to do with what he had. He missed his wool cap, but Angelique needed it more. He had his brimmed hat and that would have to suffice. A couple of mobic for the pain and off to sleep.

When dawn came, Doug took some time to heat water for a cup of soup. The fire was small and virtually smokless. He needed the calories and the warmth as a pick me up. While waiting for the water to heat, he looked at his map of the park. He knew about where he was. He was actually near one of the areas he did survival training with John and Garen’s group. He didn’t remember if they had left behind any caches. John frequently had the last class bury one for the next class. It gave him a way to make the students use what they learned. It was worth checking.

It took him a couple hours to get up into the area he was looking for. Next thing was looking for one of John’s sign posts. Doug was looking for a nail about waist high pounded into a tree. He gave himself no more than an hour to find it. If he didn’t, he would move on.

About forty-five minutes in, he finds the nail. Next step is examining the nail. He remembers listening to John explain it to the students.

“The top of the nail is a clock. When you are facing the tree with the nail in front of you, you are at the bottom of the clock. Feel the rim of the nail. Where you feel the notch or notches, pay attention to where on the circle. It then tells you where around the tree is the cache. The number of notched gives the number of arm spans from the trunk. For opsec, you can always change your position viewed from in your mind.”

Doug found the notch. Next, he matched the clock position and started searching the ground where his calculations would put it. He had no idea what might be in the cache, but more options were better than less options.

About a foot and a half down, his fingers felt rubber. He pulled the object free. It was a tractor innertube, filled and sealed. He found the double thickness on the inside edge. Using his pocket knife, he made a slit in the doubled over section, revealing the contents.

There were no surprises inside. No big earth shattering items, but several useful ones. A camouflage tarp with some bungies was in there for shelter. Several collapsible water flasks for holding water and some electrolyte packets were in there for the hydration issues. A small alcohol stove and a pint flask of straight grain would let him heat things with a low signature. A multi-tool and three MREs rounded out the supplies. Overall, not a lot, but it would help. Now he could focus some more on getting to the cabin without worrying about supplies for a bit. He was moving slow enough as it was. Between the headache and the bouts of blurry vision, it was hard enough. Step by step.
 

ComCamGuy

Remote Paramedical pain in the ass
Heidi was moving slower now once she got close to the old campsite. She was trying to listen as much as she could. She was listening hard for two things. She was listening mostly for any sound of pursuers, but she was also trying to pick up any sound ahead that might be her daughter. With fading light, she came into the campsite where the four of them had, just two days ago, toasted marshmallows and watched the stars.

She sat in the middle of the small clearing for around a half an hour. She was listening and trying to order her mind to take hold of the chaos in it. She listened for her daughter, waited for her to get impatient and move. She listened for any sound of pursuit. She tried to make sense of things. She tried to figure out what she was going to tell Emilia. She was trying to figure out how to apologize for slapping her.

At twilight, she called out softly.

“Raphaela…. Raphaela, come out now, please.”

Heidi heard some rustling in the bushes uphill. A few moments later, a timid Emilia came from the bushes towards her mother.

“Mom? What’s going on?” Her voice was shaky, her body was quivering. As she got closer, Heidi could smell the fear and urine on her.

“Emilia,” Heidi stood up and wrapped her arms around her. Heidi’s anger was ignited again. Those bastards had caused this, and some of the rage was also directed at herself. She had been blind to the need to teach Emilia about things like war.

It was because Heidi couldn’t bring herself to a level of control to discuss things from her past with Emilia. Whether it was the war or things since, she kept trying to cram everything into a box and slam the lid shut.

“I’m sorry……. I’m sorry……. I’m sorry……. I’m sorry…….”

The two of them stood there a few minutes, both crying for different reasons. Once Emilia calmed down some and Heidi had a better grip on herself, Heidi broke the embrace.

“Honey, there are some really bad things going on. Right now, I need you to trust me. We need to do some things to keep us safe.”

“Where’s Noah and Lucas? Why aren’t they with you?” Panic started creeping back into Emilia’s voice.

“Emilia, some very bad men came into camp. The ripping sound you and I heard on the trail? Those were gunshots. They killed Noah and Lucas” When she said this, Heidi saw Emilia go from disbelief to not understanding, to shock. She started to move. Heidi grabbed her in an embrace again.

“Who was it? Why would the shoot them? They can’t have killed them. This all must be a prank! What the hell is going on? Who would shoot a six year old?” Emilia was hysterical.

Heidi felt a stabbing pain, not just the loss of Noah and Lucas, but for the destruction of the bubble she had tried to keep in place around her daughter. Worse, she didn’t have any answers that would make it any better. Unbidden, she flashed back to consoling a teammate downrange on their first tour after they had lost someone. She didn’t have the answers then, and she still didn’t have the answers now.

“Emilia, I don’t know why, and right now we need to focus on not joining them. We need to get hidden and make a plan.”

“What kind of plan? Why? Oh God! Are they coming for us too? What did we do? What are we going to do?” Emilia was starting to spool up to a frantic pace again. Heidi needed to get this under some semblance of control.

“Emilia, that’s why I sent you away so quickly. That was so they couldn’t find you. That’s why I was sitting here for almost an hour before I called out to you. I was listening for anyone other than you. Right now, I don’t think they are tracking us. I don’t want to give them that option if they do change their minds. We need to hide like frightened rabbits.” Emilia was listening now.

“And then what, Mom?”

“Then we get with the Park Rangers to report this and they can catch the bastards. But first, we need to get somewhere safe to hole up for the night, get some water and food in us, get cleaned up and get some rest.”

“Where’s safe to hide?”

“I was taught to find the hardest place or terrain to move through, then get in the middle of it. People are lazy and will avoid hard work if they can. We can go further up the hill here in the brambles. I want to get us away from the trail. Oh, and here.” Heidi handed Emilia her pack. “You get to carry your own pack. Once we get set up, we can use the tarp on mine, put the sleeping bags down, and then pull the other half over us. We will look at the map and plan out next move in daylight. I don’t want to show any light at night, too easy to see at a distance.”

Heidi and Emilia started moving through the woods, looking for a space to curl up for the night.
 
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ComCamGuy

Remote Paramedical pain in the ass
Post #1609

Heidi was slated to go to FLETC- The Federal Law Enforcement Training Centers (FLETC) provides career-long training to law enforcement professionals to help them fulfill their responsibilities safely and proficiently. Over the past 49 years, FLETC has grown into the Nation’s largest provider of law enforcement training. Under a collaborative training model, FLETC’s federal partner organizations deliver training unique to their missions, while FLETC provides training in areas common to all law enforcement officers, such as firearms, driving, tactics, investigations, and legal training. Partner agencies realize quantitative and qualitative benefits from this model, including the efficiencies inherent in shared services, higher quality training, and improved interoperability. FLETC’s mission is to train all those who protect the homeland, and therefore, its training audience also includes state, local, and tribal departments throughout the U.S. Additionally, FLETC’s impact extends outside our Nation’s borders through international training and capacity-building activities. To ensure the training it offers is up-to-date and relevant to emerging needs, FLETC’s curriculum development and review process engages experts from across all levels of law enforcement, and FLETC partners extensively with other agencies and stakeholders in training research and the exchange of best practices to ensure it offers the most effective training subject matter, technologies, and methodologies.
 
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LawPoet

Contributing Member
An image of Heidi as Valkarie begins to emerge--what John Ringo would call "A Chooser of the Slain". She could well emerge as a ferocious warrior who has literally "counted" coup of her dead enemies. Heidi's going to increase her [literal] "body count"--she appears to be keeping score on her body? Kipling would be proud of her.

I fully anticipate complex women here who truly are "deadlier than [most] males" (Garen appears to be in a class by himself). CCG rises above the cliche, creating a limited "battlefield" within which to move, test, refine his complex characters and teach...by "parable/metaphor/visual imagery".

We know it's worth publication. Hopefully, it's being advanced at arfcom or other venues where aficionados gather to share their lore. [survivalistboards.com should be avoided at all costs--it's rules of operation allow the site owner, now a Canadian corporation, to take total artistic and financial control of any materials published on the site. I do read "all the fine print" of just about anything.]
 
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ComCamGuy

Remote Paramedical pain in the ass
An image of Heidi as Valkarie begins to emerge--what John Ringo would call "A Chooser of the Slain". She could well emerge as a ferocious warrior who has literally "counted coup" of her dead enemies. Kipling would be proud of her. I fully anticipate complex women here who truly are "deadlier than [most] males" (Garen appears to be in a class by himself). Heidi's going to increase her [literal] "body count"--keeping score on her body?.


She indicated Noah and Lucas were #39 & 40, so not necessarily referring to the enemies on that one. Stay tuned, she may be a bit more complex than she lets on. (in the same class as Kara level complex except maybe not as stable)
 

LawPoet

Contributing Member
Thank you. Counting...victims so that their suffering and sacrifice will not be lost? Oh yeah, I'm "tuned in". I will not revise my comment so others can learn from my error and your correction.
 

ComCamGuy

Remote Paramedical pain in the ass
We know it's worth publication. Hopefully said:
to take total artistic and financial control of any materials published on the site. I do read "all the fine print" of just about anything.[/B]]


This is the only place this story is being posted. If you haunt other site, point them this way. I get befuddled enough making sure I've got it up here. Remembering other sites and posting across them, not so much right now.
 

Griz3752

Retired, practising Curmudgeon
She indicated Noah and Lucas were #39 & 40, so not necessarily referring to the enemies on that one. Stay tuned, she may be a bit more complex than she lets on. (in the same class as Kara level complex except maybe not as stable)
Just what a guy needs around the corner: multiple unbalanced, highly trained AND proficient war fighters of unknown disposition! Talk about making it hard to get quality rack time....ah well, if it was easy, chimps would do it.
 

ComCamGuy

Remote Paramedical pain in the ass
Heidi led Emilia up the hill. From the clearing they first went parallel to the ridge the hill was part of for some distance in the brush. Heidi then turned back, almost 180 degrees, paralleling their old trail, passing the point they entered the brush. She kept making what seemed to be random turns as she went. Each time, they got a little higher up the hill. Each time she made a turn, she did so on the far side of a tree to try and disguise where they turned. After what seemed like a couple of hours of this, Emilia just had to ask. She spoke in a low voice.

“Mom, why are we wandering around like a drunk chicken going up the hill?”

“Shh. We are doing this so if they are tracking us, it will take them longer to get to us. Every turn is an opportunity to lose the trail. Every delay, buys us time. Now, let’s stay quiet.”

They continued until Heidi found a good spot behind some rocks deep in a thicket. They got a flat spot on the uphill side of the rocks. This way, the rocks were in the way of direct line of sight from the clearing on the main trail. Heidi had Emilia gather as many leaves as she could without leaving the area behind the rocks. Meanwhile Heidi took the ground cloth and used it like a rainfly over their hiding spot. As Emilia brought the leaves, Heidi spread them out on the cloth over their heads. She had created an area about three feet tall at the highest. Once the layer of leaves was about a foot thick, she had Emilia turn on the flashlight strapped to Heidi’s pack. The red light wasn’t visible through the leaves.

“Emilia, in the outside pocket of my pack is a roll of paper towels, zip locks and a pack of bleach wipes. Why don’t you get cleaned up and change clothes. It will make you feel better. Take your dirty ones and put them in a ziplock. While you do this, I will get us some wood to make us some food.”

Heidi started scavenging around for wood. She kept low and slow, trying to avoid too much noise or quick movement. She knew Emilia was probably embarrassed about peeing herself. She didn’t want to add to her daughter’s discomfort. She also knew what it was like to hike wet to the core. She knew it was miserable in the best of times. These were not the best of times.

After a good twenty or thirty minutes, Heidi came back into the shelter. The faint smell of bleach hung in the air and Emilia looked a bit better. Heidi took her stack of wood and began building a small fire. To make sure it wasn’t a beacon to everyone, she dug a hole, and then a small airshaft at an angle to the bottom of the hole. She couldn’t remember what it was called; Wyoming pit fire? Dakota? She just knew it was good for keeping the flames below ground so they couldn’t be seen from a distance. This also made it easier to cook on (her main goal). Once she got the fire going, she pulled out the metal cups from the bottom of their water bottles. To them she put a pouch of chicken and an envelope of cream of chicken soup powder. A couple shakes of her camping spice blend followed this (onion and garlic powder).

“Emma, keep an eye on these and stir them. When they boil, move them off the heat. It’s my turn to wipe down.” Emilia moved up a little to beside the fire. She watched her mother pull stuff from her pack. She was amazed at how calm she was. Normally, her mother was scattered and seemed generally frustrated by life. It was usually Emilia’s place to be calming her down. Now, Emilia was feeling so disjointed and frazzled and her mother was calm, cool and collected. If someone wasn’t killing people in the woods, she still would feel like she was in bizarro land.

She was also a little startled when her mother stripped right down there in the shelter. Her mother wasn’t necessarily a prude as far as she could tell, but was modest. Not right now, however. It had been some time since she had seen this much of her mother, and what she saw stunned her.

She knew her mom had been using the upcoming job as an excuse to work out a bit more, but she was always a sweats and baggy shirt kinda mom. Stripped down and toweling off in front of her was not exactly what she was expecting under those sweats and baggy clothes. Her mother looked like a cross fit goddess! Emilia knew that if SHE looked like her, she would never wear anything other than lycra! She had no idea why her mother felt the need to hide her body. She was gorgeous, and could be a model!, as long as they didn’t mind the tattoos. On second thought, that could have something to do with it. She thought the one was beautiful, but she knew her mother never wore anything that it would show at all.

When the cups were boiling, Heidi produced two eggs. These she cracked and added one to each cup, stirring as it went it. While it cooled enough to eat, she braided her hair into two pigtails down the sides of her head and off the back.

After their meal, It was time for Heidi to teach Emilia some things.

“Ok, Emma. With everything going on, I need you to learn some things and think a bit differently. Let’s start with stuff.” She pulled out some stuff from her pack. “The most important things, you put in your pockets.” She handed her a pocket knife and a lighter. “The next is the things you can put in bigger pockets or on your belt, like our water bottles. Also if we take off jackets or anything like that, they get tied around the waist, not crammed in the packs. Our other stuff goes in the packs. Worst case and we have to drop our packs, we still have the really important stuff with us.” She paused to see if Emilia was following along. She continued. “When we go to sleep tonight, we don’t take our packs off. That way, if we have to jump up and run, we don’t have to gather anything. Tomorrow night, I will try to teach you how to start using a compass. It could be several days or a week to get to the main ranger station to get help. Questions?”

Emilia didn’t have any. She was still in the unbelieving and shock stages. She was just trying to absorb what her mother was telling her.

“Good, let’s try to get some sleep.”
 
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LawPoet

Contributing Member
I love "Medieval" women. And more "tradecraft/lore"! [I probably read this before, but here, the setting, which creates a fierce visual image, makes it seem "new" and will help me recall it better"--that which I cannot recall when needed, I never truly learned:

“The most important things, you put in your pockets.” She handed her a pocket knife and a lighter. “The next is the things you can put in bigger pockets or on your belt, like our water bottles. Also if we take off jackets or anything like that, they get tied around the waist, not crammed in the packs. Our other stuff goes in the packs. Worst case and we have to drop our packs, we still have the really important stuff with us.... “When we go to sleep tonight, we don’t take our packs off. That way, if we have to jump up and run, we don’t have to gather anything." [Printed "gold" wisdom for a true survival situation.]
 

Freebirde

Senior Member
Heidi's camping spice is like my soup spice. Equal parts black pepper, onion powder, and garlic powder. This will make even cheap canned soup eatable. I mix equal parts this and either soul seasoning or creole seasoning to make my potato spice.
 

ComCamGuy

Remote Paramedical pain in the ass
I wouldnt want a woman like that.

WAB

Strong, Fast, and toned can be fun. One of the problems is when it goes too far in obsession. I picked a few pics of the middle of the road. The top level crossfit are in the same neighborhood as bodybuilders. The all consuming drive to build and improve leaves many unable to enjoy anything. Its all about quicker times, bigger weights 24/7.

I spent far too many years as a rock climber and in the military. I developed an appreciation for toned and muscled women. Also don't forget, the camera can lie. the two I posted earlier were fully flexed and posed. they arn't always quite that ripply. same girl, same day, different position. One looks ripped, the other friendly.

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ComCamGuy

Remote Paramedical pain in the ass
Keep in mind that Heidi seems to be working her body to build those muscles for something other than vanity, or else she wouldn’t do such a thorough job hiding her physique.
I am absolutely loving this story CCG!!! Thank you!!!

She isn't working the body to build muscles. She is channeling rage and frustration into a physical outlet. The Muscles are a side effect.
 

ComCamGuy

Remote Paramedical pain in the ass
Heidi woke Emilia before dawn. She already had some water heated and some coffee ready. Both were fairly addicted to it so they had brought a decent supply camping. Heidi had grabbed it with some of the other food supplies she scooped up at the tents. She had the last of the decent food out as well. Because they would be moving away from this area soon, she was doing the cooking now as a breakfast, that way anyone attracted by the smell would find an empty location if they could even pinpoint where it was rather than a big dinner where the smell would have led back to a pair of sleeping people.

With no frying pan or grill, Heidi had widened the fire hole a bit for cooking. She made a bed of hardwood embers from last night’s smoldering remains. Once this was down to a good level, the steaks went right on the embers. This was an old technique her father had shown her as a little girl when they went camping.

When they were cooked right, Heidi used an old plastic file folder holder like the ones they use in medical clinics as a cutting board. She had been using this type of flexible, cleanable folder for years in the kitchen. Cut your stuff, bend up the edges, and pour into the bowl/pan/ whatever. She made two piles; one for her and one for Emilia. A good hardy breakfast of steak and coffee to fortify them for the day’s hiking.

Heidi showed how to hide their fire so it would be tough to locate and also will not rekindle and burn down the forest. She also showed her how to bundle the ground cloth/tarp up in a small enough package for her pack. The two of them scattered the leaves around to disguise the site further.

The final task before they headed out was to look at the map and try to figure where they were headed. Heidi walked Emilia through the steps on orienting the map and determining compass bearings. Emilia pointed out a couple trails that seemed to go where they wanted.

“Why don’t we follow this one,’ indicating one on the map “which would take us to this one, and then we go south on it, and it will lead straight into the ranger station.”

“Because those bastards are on trails and roads. If we follow them, we could run into them. I don’t want that to happen.”

“So, if we can’t follow trails, mom, what are we going to do?”

“We use the compass, pick landmarks along our bearing and travel overland. We should run into less people that way. Speaking of which, when we are moving, we need to stay quiet. If we have to talk, it’s only in whispers. Your grandfather told me about going out in the bush on patrols. Five guys for five to ten days and no one said a word other than if they got into a fight.”

“One of these days, you need to tell me about Grandpa. He wouldn’t talk about before to me.”

“I will. He never told me any of the stories either growing up. The only time he told me was when I went to my second unit. I came home on leave after the first six months of being there and he took me up to a friend’s cabin for some ‘quality time’. I was worried it was going to be several days of religion in the mountains because I had, in his terms, ‘chosen the way of the sword’.” Heidi paused a few moments, then continued. “It was a religious experience, alright. Just not the one I was expecting. We talked about war. We also talked about tips and tricks for the field. In the evenings, I listened to him talk about the nature of war and what it does to someone. He told me how much it hurts to lose people you are responsible for, how much it hurt to lose a war. I finally found out some stuff about him I wish I had known as a kid growing up. I didn’t know why he kept that part of himself shut off.” Another pause. “I guess I know now. Like father, like daughter.”

The two started out on their course.
 
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sssarawolf

Has No Life - Lives on TB
Thank you. My oldest brother would never talk about hardly a thing from when he was in Vietnam to this day. The only thing he ever said was he hated it when he was the last truck in the convoy. The other trucks behind him had alreay been taken out and they still had two miles to go to base.
 

Griz3752

Retired, practising Curmudgeon
Thank you. My oldest brother would never talk about hardly a thing from when he was in Vietnam to this day. The only thing he ever said was he hated it when he was the last truck in the convoy. The other trucks behind him had alreay been taken out and they still had two miles to go to base.
First truck and last truck are what ambush teams use for blockers, so PRIME targets!
Crossing the start line is bad enough but having an enormous bullseye on you -- well it should keep you WIDE awake and totally situationally aware. Doesn't always work, sadly
 
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