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Haiku For The End Times

Qwix

Qwix

Loving Curious Intense Mostly Kind by God's Grace!
By Da Bai Xin

{moi}

HAIKU FOR THE END TIMES: For Clarity & Overcoming (HAIKU IMAGES for CLARITY & OVERCOMING Book 2) - Kindle edition by Xin1, Da4 Bai2, Sandford, Amelie. Religion & Spirituality Kindle eBooks @ Amazon.com.

HAIKU FOR THE END TIMES: For Clarity & Overcoming (HAIKU IMAGES for CLARITY & OVERCOMING Book 2) - Kindle edition by Xin1, Da4 Bai2, Sandford, Amelie. Download it once and read it on your Kindle device, PC, phones or tablets. Use features like bookmarks, note taking and highlighting while...
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Sample:

1
ROLLS THE TERROR IN
ON BIG
THUNDER FEET

2
The rumors of Light
Run like tendrils
Through the dark underbrush.

3
Light calls to light
In the darkening night
Few take the call

4
Kindness has vanished
Along the alleys of life
As cruelty is exalted.

5
The Old Lusty Enslavements
Heralded as New
Crept in on painted tip-toes

10
The skeletons decked in
Tinsel & lights
Danced down, down the street.

12
Love swoops down
Lifting the crushed
To Wholeness

20
For the children they said.
For the children indeed.
Stacks & stacks of them.

21
A more modest proposal
From the immodest oligarchy
A baby in every pot.

78
Kiss me here Kiss me there
Wiggle this; wiggle that.
What's your name?

94
Beside the still waters
Soaking in His heart
Becoming His reflection.

100
The valley of the
Shadow of Death
Has become a freeway.

103
Every knee shall bow
Every tongue confess
Light wins

108
You deserve it! Buy it!
Pans the media
Death by shallowness

119
Hell's hollow haughtiness
Called & strutted
Until the lightening struck

161
Every tap of the little drummer boy
Opened a sink-hole garbage chute to
Hell for the dark lord's troops.

167
Massive Motherships,
Sub-atomic atomizers
And Particle beam disintegrators
Were no match for a child's prayer

{Thanks for reading this far. BTW, I love feedback.}
 
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LawPoet

Contributing Member
As a collection, an impressive body of work. I found most to be good, but I do have my favorites:

5 - sublime - #1 to me
21 - devastating
78 - genius
100- gut punch
108 - clever - penetrating
119 - insightful

These deserve a broader audience.
 
Qwix

Qwix

Loving Curious Intense Mostly Kind by God's Grace!
LawPoet said:
As a collection, an impressive body of work. I found most to be good, but I do have my favorites:

5 - sublime - #1 to me
21 - devastating
78 - genius
100- gut punch
108 - clever - penetrating
119 - insightful

These deserve a broader audience.
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THANKS TONS for your kind reply and thoughtful, perceptive comments.

Let me check those #'s . . .

Given your preference for #5, you might like #38, #41:

41
Bouncy-Bouncy
Inflated neon bazoobies
On hollow parade

#21--I had to nod somehow to Swift's treatise A More Modest Proposal.
I still like #20.

I don't do well at giving them a broader audience. If you have any suggestions, please let me know.
 
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