Comments for Cargoman

Rabbit

Has No Life - Lives on TB
I'm glad you're back at it. I can tell this is going to be another good one. Thanks Kritter.
 

Rabbit

Has No Life - Lives on TB
Dang Kritter, this is another fantastic story and your descriptions are wonderful. I need a steady stream of this as quickly as you can write it.
 

Kritter

The one and only...
It's already written in full, but a steady stream is exactly what you're going to get.

*snickers*
 

Rabbit

Has No Life - Lives on TB
It's already written in full, but a steady stream is exactly what you're going to get.

*snickers*

Here I was trying to cut you some slack and it's already written. Would you make that a steady stream of gushers please?:lol:
 

Wiscontessa

Senior Member
Leave for a couple weeks and look what happens!! A whole new story to catch up on!!

Nice work Kritter, very nice work!
 

Rabbit

Has No Life - Lives on TB
Well shoot fire, I wanted to hear the rest of the girls story too. You pick the worst times to end a chapter.
 

Kritter

The one and only...
*grin* Actually, I'm trying to post twice what I normally do for each chapter. I'll try to press that a bit more. :P
 

awtCZ

Inactive
I've enjoyed this story enough that it finally motivated me to get signed up so I could comment and tell you how much I'm enjoying it. :D

I throughly enjoy your writing style.
 

Kritter

The one and only...
Oh Gosh, thank you awtCZ. I'm glad you're enjoying it and I appreciate the kind words. :)

(ps..if anyone sees any typos or anything, please point them out, as this is a final edit.)
 
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Rabbit

Has No Life - Lives on TB
Kritter, every time you post a new chapter it's better than the one before it, which is saying a lot. Can you double up on them please.
 

Rabbit

Has No Life - Lives on TB
This story is such a good distraction from are the horrible things happening in the world right now. It was a good fight and I liked the outcome. Thanks Kritter
 

Kritter

The one and only...
Yeah, I felt like I was in that 'ignorance is bliss' zone when I uploaded this yesterday.

But...Tomorrow's chapter...is the last chapter. :(
 

Rabbit

Has No Life - Lives on TB
"Ignorance is bliss". Yep, I was asking myself today why do I keep coming to these forums. Could I turn off the computer, throw my TV away and happily plant my head firmly in the sand and live a happily uninformed life? Heck yeah, but it's too late now, crap.

Sad to know it's the last chapter coming up, but eagerly awaiting it nonetheless. Thanks for sharing your wild and wonderful imagination with us it's like a moments reprieve.
 

kaijafon

Veteran Member
that was an awesome story! I just finished it up. Loved the ending even though the Junia was not found. wow! thank you so much!
 

idum

Swamp Gas
Kritter....I found this story a few days ago. Wonderful read. It's the first story of yours I've read, but not the last.

A very well written tale, Thanks!!!
 
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