Comment thread for:An Unexpected Life

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Holistic Granny

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Sara,
Thank you so much for the new chapter today.
Golly, I can see by the count that lots of folks are reading the story but I don't know why they aren't letting you know how super it is?????
I'm enjoying it!!!
 
45nut

45nut

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I think your doing a fine job Sara. It reads easily.

I do wish I had a chance to proofread it for you though, I noticed a couple other small things that a spellchecker just would not catch.. like "finely" instead of "finally".
 
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seraphima

Veteran Member
Forgive me, I disagree that the story started out too slow...it was very interesting to have the detail.
This last chapter shows a good use of suspense and left me waiting anxiously for the next one- good job!
 
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ofuzzy1

Just Visiting
Wow, just when I thought it could not get any better!

So will they get help in time?

Will the world get better soon?

How will they deal with the MZBs?? [mutant zombie bikers/bas-turds]

Perspiring minds want to know! :groucho:
 
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nannygoat

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thank you so much for this story - the bad guys are what worry me about when the bad time comes not other things - looking forward to more chapters soon
 
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Deena in GA

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Thanks for posting about the new chapter on main! Somehow I've missed this story until now. Just finished reading the first four chapters and am really enjoying this story! Thanks!!
 
Hansa44

Hansa44

Justine Case
I just started reading it today and it's been excellent right from the beginning. You set up the story line perfectly. You immediately let us know what we are dealing with in the main characters without going on and on and on about it.
Any book that can hold my attention for the first 4 chapters and looking for more is a well written book in my opinion.
Detail is great. Excessive detail is a turn off to many and so far it is moving along quickly.
There's only one thing wrong with it. I'm afraid I'm not going to get anything else done now that I've discovered this story.:)

GOOD JOB!!!!!
 
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Holistic Granny

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Oh golly,
My heart was poundin' after that chapter(22).
Please don't wait too long for chapt. 23 'cuz I want to know if they got all the bad guys.

Oh SSarawol
i'm so sorry - i got so excited that I posted this in the wrong spot. Can the Mods please move it to the comments.
 
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Deena in GA

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Okay, I'm caught up now and praying I never have to go through anything like that. Can we have more, please?
 
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nannygoat

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so happy to hear that both of the men are going to make it - glad the bad guys are the loosers - thanks for the new chapters and hope more soon
 
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ofuzzy1

Just Visiting
seven more chapters to go!

Wow, just when things couldn't get more interesting, they do!

Great Job SSSaraWolf,

So will they slayer's slaves and be able to help the adapt??

Looking forward to the spponfeeding of the next chapter!
 
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MaryLu

Senior Member
Just found the story and started reading. I thought I would just read for a few minutes, I read all there was! I am supposed to be getting ready for company and my son's wedding! Oh well, we all must get our priorities in proper alignment. Keep those chapters coming!
 
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ofuzzy1

Just Visiting
Wow, the MZB are far worse than I've ever read - great job!

Why didn't they use a tommy gun :)

So they didn't wait to get help, they went and got their own help!

So gad things are lookin better.
 
Siskiyoumom

Siskiyoumom

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Thank you for the details, plot development and precise character motives.
A very enjoyable read. Now where is the other weather machine? Sis
 
Laurane

Laurane

Canadian Loonie
Sara - can you elaborate on why a group would live in the mountains on the edge of society for decades and become the Slayers? With the amount of data collected by the .gov, it would be hard to remain un-noticed by people who lived near them for as long a time as they did.

I assume that they did not attack people until they became really hungry for what others had? How would they have lived until then as they don't seem to be the agrarian types? This group just seemed to "not fit" with the story if they had been there for decades.

Or maybe your story is located in the wilds somewhere, where nobody knows who is living in the area?

Just puzzling.......
 
Siskiyoumom

Siskiyoumom

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I thought she had written that they had attacked folks far away from their home territory until the shtf. Then were forced to attack locally. They appear to me to be a long standing serial killer cult. Just my 2 cents. Sis
 
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seraphima

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Interesting problem that most authors do not deal with but you have: how to cope with MZB males and females when the perps have been eliminated. They are, after all, human beings, and ones who have been abused and hurt, and it is a decent and kind response to try to help them. However, it is not easy, and there would be a lot of culture shock on both sides, as you show.
Thank you for exploring this theme, it is helpful to us all.
 
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tech

Veteran Member
Finally got the time to sit down and read this story. Although I'm only up to Ch 18, I must say it has be fantastic.

Thank you and keep going :)
 
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ofuzzy1

Just Visiting
Wow nice chapter!

Will more folks move up into the mountains???

I'm so impressed with how well you keep all this flowing so nicely!!
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Also in the trailer with Mort and Bob were Carla and William Taylor.
Also in the trailer with Mort and Bob were Mari and William Taylor.

Carla was the women "3rd in command"

doddle is spelled dawdle here in the south. :p
 
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ofuzzy1

Just Visiting
Wow! the final chapter.
Bummer about Mat.

Very nice wrap-up!


Thank you so much for sharing your story with us!

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holding unto the mirror.
holding onto the mirror.

Scrappy and Rhoda the donkeys
the donkeys: Scrappy and Rhoda

building supplies for new comers new homes.
building supplies for the new comers new homes.

and his son Henry were to learn that Robert senior
and his son Henry ... learned that Robert senior

Farmers Fort by the collage
Farmers Fort by the college
 
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Smoker1

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Thanks for a well written story. I finally got to read it all and it was great. Just hope you write another one soon,
 
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nana9

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This is a great story. And has a good story line. Liked the way this started as a woman just trying to keep the farm going.
 
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