Great story, so far. A little oops: Sis & Thomas are at her place (Ch5), when an aftershock hits in the early AM. All of a sudden, "Keith" shows up, screams "Ahh!" and disappears again!
(I know, you warned us about name changes

, but I figgered you'd appreciate a heads-up.)
Also, the section that starts Chapter 6-7 belongs further down at "Note to reader".
Not nit-picking -- it's a great story -- just want to make it "betterer"
--Rich