Comments for The Swing

DustMusher

DustMusher

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Dagnabit, I finally get caught up and what do I get???

A CLIFFHANGER!!! Cliff is NOT allowed on TB2K - he belongs to the squirrels!

Great story - I'm hooked.

DM
 
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Rabbit

Has No Life - Lives on TB
Kritter, I am really enjoying this story and I want to thank you for getting the new chapters up as quickly as you do.
 
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Rabbit

Has No Life - Lives on TB
I second that motion. Wow, don't leave us hanging too long, this is just getting better and better. (and it was already really good)
 
Kritter

Kritter

The one and only...
I had an ending for this, but now another ending is kind of haunting me, and I spent the night staring at a blank page, trying to decide which I liked better. I will force myself to chose one in a timely (by tonight, hopefully) fashion. A much harder decision though than I expected, once the notion crossed my mind. (And appropriate...I guess...by the very nature of the story...)
 
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Rabbit

Has No Life - Lives on TB
but, I don't want it to be over either. If there were an icon with forearm over forehead swooning, put it here.
 
Kritter

Kritter

The one and only...
Okay, I went with the original ending, but just an fyi, there's actually one more chapter still coming that's part of it. After that...we'll see...hehe.

:P
 
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Deena in GA

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Very intriguing! And definitely not like an ending...dare I hope there is more to come? And may I say that my vote is for Coltis?
 
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Rabbit

Has No Life - Lives on TB
You can't end it now. You've got a great imagination and this story is flowing. You haven't even taken us in Coltis' world yet. More please and then after that more.
 
Wiscontessa

Wiscontessa

Senior Member
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Rabbit said:
but, I don't want it to be over either. If there were an icon with forearm over forehead swooning, put it here.
Click to expand...

Here ya go:

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Kritter

Kritter

The one and only...
Yeah well, originally it ended with her settling for the city (and probably havin' a couple of dimple faced kids) but since the story is lending itself so well to my after thought, we'll let it go there instead...which is good, because 'I' happen to be a fan of Coltis myself.

:P
 
Kritter

Kritter

The one and only...
That was a posting spree, but those three chapters kind of tied together, so I figured I'd pump them out fast.
 
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Rabbit

Has No Life - Lives on TB
Whew, there for a minute when Gracie made her appearance I thought maybe Mia had stumbled into "Sister Wives". Please keep it coming Kritter, I'm enjoying this. Thanks
 
Kritter

Kritter

The one and only...
I was at Bikefest in Raleigh this weekend, and both Suzuki and Harley had their concept bikes out there. I droooled over those Brawlers. Anyhow, check these out.

Suzuki G-Strider Concept

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Harley Brawler Concept

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Rabbit

Has No Life - Lives on TB
This is getting good. I'm thinking one city is an illusion and it may not be the one we think?
 
Kritter

Kritter

The one and only...
I put two chapters up in kind of quick succession, because I still felt like writing, so...yeah..just a warning..since the second chapter popped onto the second page, and i don't want anyone confused. :P
 
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