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OH NO!!! He's at it again!!! They say that poets who read their own works in public usually have other bad habits as well. Well, I'm giving writing another shot. Now, I'm a hunt and peck typist. Which means this story (which at this point remains untitled) is a work in progress. Please bare with me. And again, I would like to ask for any comments or questions be placed on a seperate thread, or simply use the old one. If you missed the first story, it is here.
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Overthrown, the Death of America
Book Two
Ashley did all she could to look like everyone else. She shuffled along with her head hung down, barely lifting her feet off the sidewalk as she pulled a small child's wagon along behind her. She only raised her head once in a while to make sure she was going the right way, and then hung her head again pretending to be as weak and tired as everyone else was. In the wagon was what she could get in the way of this week’s allotment of food from the disbursement center. It had been placed in a metal cage that had been securely locked and bolted to the wagon.
She knew she was taking a chance by going to the center by herself. There had been many reports of people being mugged for whatever food they had, not far from there. The authorities were convinced that the robberies were planned and committed by a group of young people, probably gang members. Ever since the shortages had started to get bad, people everywhere started losing weight. Not by choice, but because there simply wasn't enough food for them to eat like they used to eat. Anyone who even looked overweight was viewed with suspicion, and they were often the subjects of the attacks. However with the number of people coming to the center on distribution days from every conceivable direction, it was impossible for law enforcement to provide protection for them all. The thieves knew that and took full advantage of it. Sometimes, the person under attack would fight back to keep what they had. When they did, things usually ended badly for them. They were certainly hurt and in some cases, people had been killed. All for the food. Neighborhoods had started getting to gether in groups and travel to the centers together for mutual protection. The problem with that was that the people working at the center would see them coming, and begin to put things in the back rooms, so there would be at least something for as many people as possible.
The massive earthquakes that had devastated the entire west coast had done much to create this situation. One of the worst things that had happened was when Hoover Dam had failed. Anything even near the Colorado River downstream of the dam either was not there anymore, or if it had high enough above the water to have survived the flooding, was damaged beyond repair. Many of them made that way by the people who lived through the disaster, searching for whatever they could find to eat, drink, or just to keep warm at night. But it was after rescue operations started that things turned ugly. Without electricity to keep or prepare their food, most people were very hungry in a short period of time. Only those who happened to have a vehicle and the fuel on hand to make a journey to some place that would have power ever managed to get out of a major portion of the southwestern part of the country. Many of them had to either fight to keep their vehicles, if they were foolish enough to stop to see if they could help someone, or simply by passed anyone they saw. In some cases that included running over anyone who didn’t get out of the way. For the majority that remained, all soon became chaos. The social services that so many had counted on being there to help them in times of trouble, had suffered as badly as everyone else. The roads, for rescue vehicles and personnel were just as absent since they, along with everything else had been washed away.
Without the power that had been provided by the dam, most rescue operations soon became fly-over’s to see if anything moved and then send in people on foot or on horseback to see what could be done. It was after two or three rescue workers had been assaulted, and their horses killed, cooked and eaten that governmental agencies really got their first idea as to the scope of the problem. Every truck and trailer of any size that could be used to get relief supplies to the southwestern part of the country was mobilized for that purpose. While well intentioned, it was a failed effort in most cases. Truckers going into the area had to make their way through unbelievable amounts of all kinds of traffic and trouble to get there. Roads leading into the area were choked with cars, animal drawn wagons, and people on foot near the outer edges of the earthquake zone. Even here, outside the disaster area, if the truckers stopped, the crowds of refugees would descend on the trucks and strip them bare in minutes. After the first few times, armed escorts were required, which helped but didn’t completely eliminate the threat. It seemed as if everyone from Arizona to California and from Mexico to the Oregon border were headed someplace else. It wasn’t possible to care for them all, and the more ruthless soon began to prey on the weaker people.
But even that hadn’t done it all. A monstrous hurricane had all but washed major portions of the fertile southeastern part of the country out to sea. No less than six hurricanes had combined into one storm and made straight for the coast near the Florida/Georgia state line. Its winds reached well over two hundred miles an hour. It was doubtful that there were many buildings left standing anywhere within fifty miles of the coast. There had been no news of anything south of Tallahassee, Florida in a few months now. Farm lands once rich and abundant with crops had been blown to bits, or submerged in the water left over from the storm. They would spend years trying to rebuilt, and no crops in any meaningful amounts would be coming from down there for some time after that.
Yes, everyone was quite underfed, and very tired because of it. And she worried if people were beginning to notice that she wasn’t as underfed as the rest of them. That was why she now had to make the risky solo trip to the disbursement center. Some of the people still living in her area were beginning to notice it seemed to her.
"Ashley. You're looking well."
A voice seemed to come from behind her. She was sure she recognized it, and Ashley almost cringed at the words. It was true, she did look healthy and fit, and that was the last thing she wanted. Before everything had gotten so bad, she had to admit she had been a bit overweight. Back then, she would have considered such words to be a compliment. So when the shortages started, nobody thought a thing about her looking heavier than those around her. She had more to lose to start with. Now, overweight people were a thing of the past. Yet even though she was smaller than she had been since she was a teenager, she still had that appearance of being well fed. That was why she had started to go to the center alone. Too many people had too many questions. Maybe now her dishonesty was finally going to catch up with her. She stopped her shuffling walk, and looked to see who had spoken.
"What? Did someone say something to me?" She spoke pretending as if she could barely get the words out.
"Ashley. It's me. Brett, from high school. Don't you remember me?"
She remembered him well enough. Brett was one of those kids you could never really trust. He had always been secretive. And while there had never been any proof, it had been said that he was one of the ones who would snitch on the other kids in school and get them into trouble. Especially if it meant that he got out of whatever trouble he might have been in, or as long as there was some kind of profit to him. She had no idea that he was in town again, and really didn't want to be seen with him.
"Oh. Hi Brett. I didn't see you standing there."
"No surprise. I was watching you come down the street, and was wondering if that was you. I never saw you lift your head, so I wasn't sure. You certainly have taken off a few pounds, I must say. And all in the right places too."
Again, Ashley thought how not so long ago those words would have made her smile. Now they made her suspicious. What did Brett see that she didn't want him to see? The weather was windy and a bit cool, so she had worn a heavy looking coat to hide her fitness. Did he see through her disguise?
"Well, we all have lost some lately. In case you didn't notice." Ashley really looked at him for the first time. She noticed that he too looked like he was feeling well, and the fullness of his cheeks told her that he was eating as well as she had been. That could mean a lot of things, or nothing. She was unsure of what to think.
"That's true. But, I don't know. You just seem to be handling everything better than most. Do you have a lower metabolism or something?"
"No, it's not that. I just had more to lose, that's all. It's been a while since high school. Before all of this, I had put on a few more pounds than I had when we last saw each other." Ashley lied to him. In fact she had already been working hard to lose weight before everything had happened. But since they hadn't seen each other in a few years, she hoped the lie would pass as truth.
"You must have put on more than a few, because you sure are looking good now. You're not like most of the other girls I've seen from school. They are all thin and tired looking. You look like you could run a marathon."
"Hardly. I'm too tired for that, and I never liked running in the first place." The subject was beginning to become too uncomfortable for Ashley, so she changed the subject slightly. "What about you? You certainly don't seem the worst for wear."
"Who? Me? Oh, I've been doing all right. I've got a job that makes sure I don't get shorted at the distribution centers." He smiled at her. "Yeah, things have worked out pretty well for me. Looks like you must be doing fairly well. Judging by that wagon you must have a boyfriend over there at the center. It seems like he might have overloaded you a bit." He pointed at the food in the wagon.
"Not really." She showed him her disbursement card. "As you can see, I am caring for my Grandmother. That's why it looks that full."
She knew that most people wouldn't even bother to look at her card. Nobody cared how much you were allowed to get, they just didn't want you to take more than your own share. Brett leaned over and studied the card carefully for a moment. Then he stood up straight and spoke again.
"I remember her. How's she doing these days?"
"She doesn't get around much anymore. Especially since things started to get violent. She's too scared to leave the house. So I end up doing all of the outside things, like going to the disbursement center."
As lies went, this was only a minor one. Ashley had indeed been assigned the task of caring for her aged grandmother by the government, since her parents were dead. She had simply, and conveniently, forgotten to inform the authorities when the old woman had passed away six months ago. She had known the time was coming before it got there. Her grandmother had slowly faded away instead of dying suddenly. Ashley had been given the time to prepare for the event. Both women knew she was dying and there was nothing that could be done about it. She had buried her grandmother in the basement of her home, and continued to collect the disbursement allotments for the both of them by their mutual agreement ahead of time. She used the excuse of her grandmother’s age and health as a reason for the elder woman not showing up at the center. Since the two of them had been coming in for some time before that, they knew them and easily believed the story. Now, not being half starved like everyone else was was the reason she looked so well.
"I'm sorry to hear that. Maybe I should come over and see if I can help out a little bit." He sounded so sincere. And he did seem to be attracted to her. That was something that hadn't happened very often before. But she couldn't take the chance. He had stared at the disbursement card. What was he looking for?
"I'm sorry. That's not a good idea. Gram is kind of out of it. I'm the only one she remembers anymore. Everyone else scares her." She hoped the story worked. Then before he could come up with another reason to keep her for more conversation she spoke again. "Speaking of Gram, I need to be going, Brett. If you'll excuse me."
With that short announcement, she turned and started to shuffle away as fast as she dared go. She wanted to abandon the wagon and run. In truth, she could have. She knew that within a few feet was the door to a still open store with customers in it. Since times had become harder, the hardware stores showed a brisk increase in business as more and more people learned to do things they had never dreamed possible before. It was one such store she thought about diving into to lose Brett, by heading out the back door before he could reach her. She thought about it. In the end she decided not to run. She had given him believable excuses. So there was no need to run. That would certainly cause him to give chase, and he knew where she lived.
Still as she passed a long abandoned car on the street, she glanced down into the reflection in the windshield of what was going on behind her. She saw him continuing to watch her move down the street. It made her uneasy, but she had already made her choice, now she had continue on. Her mind was swarming with thoughts about what would happen next. Brett had to be working with the government. Why else would he show up after being away so long? Why else would he be so interested in her card? If he wasn't working for the government, why was he so interested in her grandmother? These thoughts and more went around and around in her mind. They stayed with her until she reached the corner and started to turn towards her home. Out of the corner of her eye, she looked again. Brett was nowhere to be seen, but she still had the feeling she was being watched.
Once around the corner, Ashley began to calm herself. After all, she reasoned, if anyone was interested in what she was doing, she already had excuses and even faked 'proof' of her innocence should people start asking questions. As she continued to slowly make her way home, she considered her run in with Brett. It was bad enough that having neighbors ask questions she didn't want to answer. But when someone like Brett came along, that was different. He hadn't seen her in a long time, and even he noticed right away that she seemed to be healthier than others. To her it meant that the time of her excuses of being too heavy to begin with was rapidly coming to an end. She needed another way to avoid being noticed. That was how the government found out about hoarders. People noticed something different about their neighbors and turned them in anonymously, for a hoped for share in whatever things the hoarders had hidden away. If she was starting to look that obvious, it was time to change her tactics.
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Overthrown, the Death of America
Book Two
Ashley did all she could to look like everyone else. She shuffled along with her head hung down, barely lifting her feet off the sidewalk as she pulled a small child's wagon along behind her. She only raised her head once in a while to make sure she was going the right way, and then hung her head again pretending to be as weak and tired as everyone else was. In the wagon was what she could get in the way of this week’s allotment of food from the disbursement center. It had been placed in a metal cage that had been securely locked and bolted to the wagon.
She knew she was taking a chance by going to the center by herself. There had been many reports of people being mugged for whatever food they had, not far from there. The authorities were convinced that the robberies were planned and committed by a group of young people, probably gang members. Ever since the shortages had started to get bad, people everywhere started losing weight. Not by choice, but because there simply wasn't enough food for them to eat like they used to eat. Anyone who even looked overweight was viewed with suspicion, and they were often the subjects of the attacks. However with the number of people coming to the center on distribution days from every conceivable direction, it was impossible for law enforcement to provide protection for them all. The thieves knew that and took full advantage of it. Sometimes, the person under attack would fight back to keep what they had. When they did, things usually ended badly for them. They were certainly hurt and in some cases, people had been killed. All for the food. Neighborhoods had started getting to gether in groups and travel to the centers together for mutual protection. The problem with that was that the people working at the center would see them coming, and begin to put things in the back rooms, so there would be at least something for as many people as possible.
The massive earthquakes that had devastated the entire west coast had done much to create this situation. One of the worst things that had happened was when Hoover Dam had failed. Anything even near the Colorado River downstream of the dam either was not there anymore, or if it had high enough above the water to have survived the flooding, was damaged beyond repair. Many of them made that way by the people who lived through the disaster, searching for whatever they could find to eat, drink, or just to keep warm at night. But it was after rescue operations started that things turned ugly. Without electricity to keep or prepare their food, most people were very hungry in a short period of time. Only those who happened to have a vehicle and the fuel on hand to make a journey to some place that would have power ever managed to get out of a major portion of the southwestern part of the country. Many of them had to either fight to keep their vehicles, if they were foolish enough to stop to see if they could help someone, or simply by passed anyone they saw. In some cases that included running over anyone who didn’t get out of the way. For the majority that remained, all soon became chaos. The social services that so many had counted on being there to help them in times of trouble, had suffered as badly as everyone else. The roads, for rescue vehicles and personnel were just as absent since they, along with everything else had been washed away.
Without the power that had been provided by the dam, most rescue operations soon became fly-over’s to see if anything moved and then send in people on foot or on horseback to see what could be done. It was after two or three rescue workers had been assaulted, and their horses killed, cooked and eaten that governmental agencies really got their first idea as to the scope of the problem. Every truck and trailer of any size that could be used to get relief supplies to the southwestern part of the country was mobilized for that purpose. While well intentioned, it was a failed effort in most cases. Truckers going into the area had to make their way through unbelievable amounts of all kinds of traffic and trouble to get there. Roads leading into the area were choked with cars, animal drawn wagons, and people on foot near the outer edges of the earthquake zone. Even here, outside the disaster area, if the truckers stopped, the crowds of refugees would descend on the trucks and strip them bare in minutes. After the first few times, armed escorts were required, which helped but didn’t completely eliminate the threat. It seemed as if everyone from Arizona to California and from Mexico to the Oregon border were headed someplace else. It wasn’t possible to care for them all, and the more ruthless soon began to prey on the weaker people.
But even that hadn’t done it all. A monstrous hurricane had all but washed major portions of the fertile southeastern part of the country out to sea. No less than six hurricanes had combined into one storm and made straight for the coast near the Florida/Georgia state line. Its winds reached well over two hundred miles an hour. It was doubtful that there were many buildings left standing anywhere within fifty miles of the coast. There had been no news of anything south of Tallahassee, Florida in a few months now. Farm lands once rich and abundant with crops had been blown to bits, or submerged in the water left over from the storm. They would spend years trying to rebuilt, and no crops in any meaningful amounts would be coming from down there for some time after that.
Yes, everyone was quite underfed, and very tired because of it. And she worried if people were beginning to notice that she wasn’t as underfed as the rest of them. That was why she now had to make the risky solo trip to the disbursement center. Some of the people still living in her area were beginning to notice it seemed to her.
"Ashley. You're looking well."
A voice seemed to come from behind her. She was sure she recognized it, and Ashley almost cringed at the words. It was true, she did look healthy and fit, and that was the last thing she wanted. Before everything had gotten so bad, she had to admit she had been a bit overweight. Back then, she would have considered such words to be a compliment. So when the shortages started, nobody thought a thing about her looking heavier than those around her. She had more to lose to start with. Now, overweight people were a thing of the past. Yet even though she was smaller than she had been since she was a teenager, she still had that appearance of being well fed. That was why she had started to go to the center alone. Too many people had too many questions. Maybe now her dishonesty was finally going to catch up with her. She stopped her shuffling walk, and looked to see who had spoken.
"What? Did someone say something to me?" She spoke pretending as if she could barely get the words out.
"Ashley. It's me. Brett, from high school. Don't you remember me?"
She remembered him well enough. Brett was one of those kids you could never really trust. He had always been secretive. And while there had never been any proof, it had been said that he was one of the ones who would snitch on the other kids in school and get them into trouble. Especially if it meant that he got out of whatever trouble he might have been in, or as long as there was some kind of profit to him. She had no idea that he was in town again, and really didn't want to be seen with him.
"Oh. Hi Brett. I didn't see you standing there."
"No surprise. I was watching you come down the street, and was wondering if that was you. I never saw you lift your head, so I wasn't sure. You certainly have taken off a few pounds, I must say. And all in the right places too."
Again, Ashley thought how not so long ago those words would have made her smile. Now they made her suspicious. What did Brett see that she didn't want him to see? The weather was windy and a bit cool, so she had worn a heavy looking coat to hide her fitness. Did he see through her disguise?
"Well, we all have lost some lately. In case you didn't notice." Ashley really looked at him for the first time. She noticed that he too looked like he was feeling well, and the fullness of his cheeks told her that he was eating as well as she had been. That could mean a lot of things, or nothing. She was unsure of what to think.
"That's true. But, I don't know. You just seem to be handling everything better than most. Do you have a lower metabolism or something?"
"No, it's not that. I just had more to lose, that's all. It's been a while since high school. Before all of this, I had put on a few more pounds than I had when we last saw each other." Ashley lied to him. In fact she had already been working hard to lose weight before everything had happened. But since they hadn't seen each other in a few years, she hoped the lie would pass as truth.
"You must have put on more than a few, because you sure are looking good now. You're not like most of the other girls I've seen from school. They are all thin and tired looking. You look like you could run a marathon."
"Hardly. I'm too tired for that, and I never liked running in the first place." The subject was beginning to become too uncomfortable for Ashley, so she changed the subject slightly. "What about you? You certainly don't seem the worst for wear."
"Who? Me? Oh, I've been doing all right. I've got a job that makes sure I don't get shorted at the distribution centers." He smiled at her. "Yeah, things have worked out pretty well for me. Looks like you must be doing fairly well. Judging by that wagon you must have a boyfriend over there at the center. It seems like he might have overloaded you a bit." He pointed at the food in the wagon.
"Not really." She showed him her disbursement card. "As you can see, I am caring for my Grandmother. That's why it looks that full."
She knew that most people wouldn't even bother to look at her card. Nobody cared how much you were allowed to get, they just didn't want you to take more than your own share. Brett leaned over and studied the card carefully for a moment. Then he stood up straight and spoke again.
"I remember her. How's she doing these days?"
"She doesn't get around much anymore. Especially since things started to get violent. She's too scared to leave the house. So I end up doing all of the outside things, like going to the disbursement center."
As lies went, this was only a minor one. Ashley had indeed been assigned the task of caring for her aged grandmother by the government, since her parents were dead. She had simply, and conveniently, forgotten to inform the authorities when the old woman had passed away six months ago. She had known the time was coming before it got there. Her grandmother had slowly faded away instead of dying suddenly. Ashley had been given the time to prepare for the event. Both women knew she was dying and there was nothing that could be done about it. She had buried her grandmother in the basement of her home, and continued to collect the disbursement allotments for the both of them by their mutual agreement ahead of time. She used the excuse of her grandmother’s age and health as a reason for the elder woman not showing up at the center. Since the two of them had been coming in for some time before that, they knew them and easily believed the story. Now, not being half starved like everyone else was was the reason she looked so well.
"I'm sorry to hear that. Maybe I should come over and see if I can help out a little bit." He sounded so sincere. And he did seem to be attracted to her. That was something that hadn't happened very often before. But she couldn't take the chance. He had stared at the disbursement card. What was he looking for?
"I'm sorry. That's not a good idea. Gram is kind of out of it. I'm the only one she remembers anymore. Everyone else scares her." She hoped the story worked. Then before he could come up with another reason to keep her for more conversation she spoke again. "Speaking of Gram, I need to be going, Brett. If you'll excuse me."
With that short announcement, she turned and started to shuffle away as fast as she dared go. She wanted to abandon the wagon and run. In truth, she could have. She knew that within a few feet was the door to a still open store with customers in it. Since times had become harder, the hardware stores showed a brisk increase in business as more and more people learned to do things they had never dreamed possible before. It was one such store she thought about diving into to lose Brett, by heading out the back door before he could reach her. She thought about it. In the end she decided not to run. She had given him believable excuses. So there was no need to run. That would certainly cause him to give chase, and he knew where she lived.
Still as she passed a long abandoned car on the street, she glanced down into the reflection in the windshield of what was going on behind her. She saw him continuing to watch her move down the street. It made her uneasy, but she had already made her choice, now she had continue on. Her mind was swarming with thoughts about what would happen next. Brett had to be working with the government. Why else would he show up after being away so long? Why else would he be so interested in her card? If he wasn't working for the government, why was he so interested in her grandmother? These thoughts and more went around and around in her mind. They stayed with her until she reached the corner and started to turn towards her home. Out of the corner of her eye, she looked again. Brett was nowhere to be seen, but she still had the feeling she was being watched.
Once around the corner, Ashley began to calm herself. After all, she reasoned, if anyone was interested in what she was doing, she already had excuses and even faked 'proof' of her innocence should people start asking questions. As she continued to slowly make her way home, she considered her run in with Brett. It was bad enough that having neighbors ask questions she didn't want to answer. But when someone like Brett came along, that was different. He hadn't seen her in a long time, and even he noticed right away that she seemed to be healthier than others. To her it meant that the time of her excuses of being too heavy to begin with was rapidly coming to an end. She needed another way to avoid being noticed. That was how the government found out about hoarders. People noticed something different about their neighbors and turned them in anonymously, for a hoped for share in whatever things the hoarders had hidden away. If she was starting to look that obvious, it was time to change her tactics.
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