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  1. 02-07-2011 10:25 PM #1
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    This is what I will call a Historical Fantasy Adventure.
    Last edited by Kritter; 02-08-2011 at 01:03 AM.
    Author of 'Homebound' * Romance and Mystery in an old-fashioned southern town.
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  2. 02-08-2011 10:35 PM #2
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    I'm glad you're back at it. I can tell this is going to be another good one. Thanks Kritter.
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  3. 02-11-2011 02:42 PM #3
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    That boy is about to be shanghaied isn't he?
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  4. 02-11-2011 04:12 PM #4
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    Love your "tale" - thanks much Kritter!
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    Malcolm Reynolds: “So me and mine got to lie down and die so you can live in your better world?”
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  5. 02-12-2011 01:17 AM #5
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    Wonderful new story Kritter! Thankyou
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  6. 02-15-2011 08:00 PM #6
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    Awesome chapter! Thanks Kritter!!!
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  7. 02-15-2011 08:34 PM #7
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    Dang Kritter, this is another fantastic story and your descriptions are wonderful. I need a steady stream of this as quickly as you can write it.
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  8. 02-16-2011 05:24 AM #8
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    It's already written in full, but a steady stream is exactly what you're going to get.

    *snickers*
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  9. 02-16-2011 12:56 PM #9
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kritter View Post
    It's already written in full, but a steady stream is exactly what you're going to get.

    *snickers*
    Here I was trying to cut you some slack and it's already written. Would you make that a steady stream of gushers please?
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  10. 02-20-2011 10:26 PM #10
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    Excellent story.
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  11. 02-21-2011 03:00 AM #11
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    Quote Originally Posted by Rabbit View Post
    Excellent story.
    Thank you Rabbit.
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  12. 02-25-2011 06:27 AM #12
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    Posted two chapters back to back. Crazy schedule this week. :P
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  13. 02-26-2011 09:32 PM #13
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    Leave for a couple weeks and look what happens!! A whole new story to catch up on!!

    Nice work Kritter, very nice work!
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  14. 03-01-2011 11:39 PM #14
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    Well shoot fire, I wanted to hear the rest of the girls story too. You pick the worst times to end a chapter.
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  15. 03-02-2011 12:17 AM #15
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    *grin* Actually, I'm trying to post twice what I normally do for each chapter. I'll try to press that a bit more. :P
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  16. 03-02-2011 02:08 PM #16
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    Appreciate it, but your story is so good I want it quicker than you can post it.
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  17. 03-03-2011 09:41 AM #17
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    I've enjoyed this story enough that it finally motivated me to get signed up so I could comment and tell you how much I'm enjoying it.

    I throughly enjoy your writing style.
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  18. 03-03-2011 12:36 PM #18
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    Oh Gosh, thank you awtCZ. I'm glad you're enjoying it and I appreciate the kind words.

    (ps..if anyone sees any typos or anything, please point them out, as this is a final edit.)
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  19. 03-04-2011 05:18 PM #19
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    Kritter, every time you post a new chapter it's better than the one before it, which is saying a lot. Can you double up on them please.
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  20. 03-04-2011 05:50 PM #20
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    Will do.
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  21. 03-04-2011 07:56 PM #21
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    TB is going down tomorrow morning at 11:00, hurry!
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  22. 03-05-2011 07:58 AM #22
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    I'll have a couple of chapters up before 11 for you to chew on. :P
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  23. 03-08-2011 06:33 PM #23
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    Two chapters posted.
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  24. 03-08-2011 09:22 PM #24
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    All is going well and then Leo shows up. Thanks for the new chapters Kritter.
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  25. 03-10-2011 11:09 PM #25
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    Hurry Kritter before the place crashes again.
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  26. 03-13-2011 02:55 PM #26
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    I've been waiting for this. Please let Mardus beat the fool out of Leo.
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  27. 03-13-2011 03:46 PM #27
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    Quote Originally Posted by Rabbit View Post
    I've been waiting for this. Please let Mardus beat the fool out of Leo.
    *grins*
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  28. 03-14-2011 02:53 PM #28
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    This story is such a good distraction from are the horrible things happening in the world right now. It was a good fight and I liked the outcome. Thanks Kritter
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  29. 03-14-2011 08:17 PM #29
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    Yeah, I felt like I was in that 'ignorance is bliss' zone when I uploaded this yesterday.

    But...Tomorrow's chapter...is the last chapter.
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  30. 03-14-2011 10:37 PM #30
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    "Ignorance is bliss". Yep, I was asking myself today why do I keep coming to these forums. Could I turn off the computer, throw my TV away and happily plant my head firmly in the sand and live a happily uninformed life? Heck yeah, but it's too late now, crap.

    Sad to know it's the last chapter coming up, but eagerly awaiting it nonetheless. Thanks for sharing your wild and wonderful imagination with us it's like a moments reprieve.
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  31. 03-15-2011 03:29 PM #31
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    that was an awesome story! I just finished it up. Loved the ending even though the Junia was not found. wow! thank you so much!
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    Thanks for the engrossing tale, Kritter...it was truly riveting!
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    Well, Thank ya much!

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    Thanks for the good story!
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    Kritter....I found this story a few days ago. Wonderful read. It's the first story of yours I've read, but not the last.

    A very well written tale, Thanks!!!
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